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that we are silently drifting apart

do u think i will shout about
how love turned it"s back on us

do u think i will reveal how
we grope for words,instead of conversing

do you imagine i will disclose the trauma you go through
trying to make things appear normal

are you aware that our lack of warmth
has been patiently pleading for separation

are you expecting me to let you know
i don"t feel alive in ur presence any longer

are you just gonna sit there and cry
anticipating comfort from me

can"t you see it is not working
do i have to let you know that i'm a lying cheat

is there a way out
is our secret worth keeping

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our secrets

Contributed by igba on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 09:26:53 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

do u think i will let the world know
that we are silently drifting apart

do u think i will shout about
how love turned it"s back on us

do u think i will reveal how
we grope for words,instead of conversing

do you imagine i will disclose the trauma you go through
trying to make things appear normal

are you aware that our lack of warmth
has been patiently pleading for separation

are you expecting me to let you know
i don"t feel alive in ur presence any longer

are you just gonna sit there and cry
anticipating comfort from me

can"t you see it is not working
do i have to let you know that i'm a lying cheat

is there a way out
is our secret worth keeping

Copyright © igba ... [ 2005-09-16 09:26:53]
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Re: our secrets (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 09:40:17 AM AEST
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Could have been better if you had spelled in full, put some punctuations here and there.

Re: our secrets (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:11:08 AM AEST
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few mechanics that need fixing

loved the poem!!! absolutely beautiful
i also felt like this
and i hate that feeling
but i hope you get through it
and i hope that you'll move on to better things

~*Bethani*~

Re: our secrets (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:56:08 AM AEST
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A good writing. I'd change 'trauma' for 'wound' or something alike to let it sound more natural.
Good luck...
Alex

Re: our secrets (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 05:45:35 PM AEST
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This is so honest and heartfelt.. I am sure a lot of people will identify with this.... as we too have 'our secret'
Thank you for sharing...
Jenni

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