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Array ( [sid] => 105838 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blood Thoughts [time] => 2005-09-16 20:16:26 [hometext] => meh... i dunno just read it and tell me what you think [bodytext] => the thoughts
of death floating
through out my mind
through out my soul
just like the blood
running threw out
my vital organs

it flows and just doesn't stop
it keeps flowing
what will happen when it ends?
will it come to the same outcome?
will it all be done?
will I no longer exist?
except as a memory
to some?
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 61 [informant] => oreo_kisses [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Blood Thoughts

Contributed by oreo_kisses on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 08:16:26 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

the thoughts
of death floating
through out my mind
through out my soul
just like the blood
running threw out
my vital organs

it flows and just doesn't stop
it keeps flowing
what will happen when it ends?
will it come to the same outcome?
will it all be done?
will I no longer exist?
except as a memory
to some?

Copyright © oreo_kisses ... [ 2005-09-16 20:16:26]
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Re: Blood Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by death_not_be_feared on Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 01:50:42 AM AEST
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i know what youre feeling and i can relate good write

Re: Blood Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 09:44:06 AM AEST
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I'll be honest and say it wasn't worth thinking about, let alone submitting here for me to read. How can running blood throw out one's vital organs?

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