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Cold and alone I sit and quake
The sky outside is black and cold
As I sit time grows old
Everyone deserves their own special place
Seems like I just take up space
I could end it all with just one shot
But I often think, “I better not.”
Confused and worried I lie awake
Cold and alone I sit and quake
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Feelings of a Broken Heart

Contributed by Chubs on Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 04:05:28 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Confused and worried I lie awake
Cold and alone I sit and quake
The sky outside is black and cold
As I sit time grows old
Everyone deserves their own special place
Seems like I just take up space
I could end it all with just one shot
But I often think, “I better not.”
Confused and worried I lie awake
Cold and alone I sit and quake

Copyright Â© Chubs ... [ 2005-09-17 16:05:28]
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Re: Feelings of a Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 05:03:32 PM AEST
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Some of us do not realize our reason for being here till later in life. You are here for a reason and it is not just to take up space. Please just accept life and find the beauty in it until you find the mission meant for you. You/me/we all have a use, a place, in this world. Sometimes we affect people without even realizing it and yet we made a difference. Never give up. NEVER.

Smiles,
Rita

Re: Feelings of a Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by LostAmbition on Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 09:44:12 PM AEST
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i see your point dude
but the rhymes are forced
don't let it take away from your emotions
keep writing!

Re: Feelings of a Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by veenu on Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 05:28:08 AM AEST
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i like this small piece which is ment much
great flow of words
keep sharing

Re: Feelings of a Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:52:43 PM AEST
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We all have a reason for being here. You may not realize that just yet, you will later on in life. The key is to never give up. Chin up and all the best of luck.
*hugs*
Sue, ED.

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