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Knowing that Nothing will give Hope?

Dark Winged Angels cover me

While the Light Attempts to Shine.

Crumbling from the Light

Our Hopes Progress Further

To the Depths of the Heart of the Demon

Only then will we Truly be Free.

With Eyes of Temptation and a Black Heart of Sins

Only the Lord and I are Able to Prevail the Darkness Inside.
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Prevail

Contributed by Eternal_Skies on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical



Shall I Stay in the Dark Abyss

Knowing that Nothing will give Hope?

Dark Winged Angels cover me

While the Light Attempts to Shine.

Crumbling from the Light

Our Hopes Progress Further

To the Depths of the Heart of the Demon

Only then will we Truly be Free.

With Eyes of Temptation and a Black Heart of Sins

Only the Lord and I are Able to Prevail the Darkness Inside.




Copyright © Eternal_Skies ... [ 2003-01-17 20:20:00]
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Re: Prevail (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 11:25:55 PM AEST
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I really liked this,I didnt see anything wrong with this write! Keep em coming! Christina


Re: Prevail (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 03:33:58 AM AEST
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Not that good?? Please dont go there....this poem was awesome..i love the line "Dark Winged Angels cover me" and "To the Depths of the Heart of the Demon" it has a darkness to it but then in the end it' s so full of inspiration and hope, it has a beautiful ending....this is a good write....not a thing wrong with this one......beautiful....i love it..
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