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Array ( [sid] => 106452 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The End [time] => 2005-09-25 13:38:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => go ahead and judge me.
i don't care what you see.
look deep inside my twisted soul,
and see how little you mean to me.

**** with my mind,
my body and soul.
screw me up forever,
who cares if i'm whole?

don't you get it yet?
it doesn't matter what you do.
the only thing that just might hurt
is knowing i could never miss you.

maybe i'm a ****** person?
maybe i deserve to burn?
maybe you should lay off the assumptions
and face the fate you earned.

try to make me guilty.
try to make me cry.
it doesn't matter what you do;
no tears fall from these eyes.

so take the happy memories;
destroy them one by one.
hide them away within your mind;
come find me when you're done. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 13 [informant] => CBlake [notes] => |||||||Partially edited out, due to the use of letters to indicate banned words. Please ensure that, in future, all banned words are completely edited out prior to submission. Thank you. ♦Moderator_14♦||||||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The End

Contributed by CBlake on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:38:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

go ahead and judge me.
i don't care what you see.
look deep inside my twisted soul,
and see how little you mean to me.

**** with my mind,
my body and soul.
screw me up forever,
who cares if i'm whole?

don't you get it yet?
it doesn't matter what you do.
the only thing that just might hurt
is knowing i could never miss you.

maybe i'm a ****** person?
maybe i deserve to burn?
maybe you should lay off the assumptions
and face the fate you earned.

try to make me guilty.
try to make me cry.
it doesn't matter what you do;
no tears fall from these eyes.

so take the happy memories;
destroy them one by one.
hide them away within your mind;
come find me when you're done.

Copyright © CBlake ... [ 2005-09-25 13:38:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:45:28 PM AEST
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wow, i really liked it. your emotion ruled over the whole poem. great job, keep it up
-trini

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:11:22 PM AEST
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lots of inner emotion..maybe you should tell them face to face.yes, its hard, yet may make you feel better. Dont bottle, feelings...sometimes we hurt, more, when you do.!

Brew~

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by BEBE on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:49:15 PM AEST
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So ful of emotion... i like:)
GODBLESS
BEBE

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by BEBE on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:49:44 PM AEST
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So ful of emotion... i like:)
GODBLESS
BEBE

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