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[aid] => mick
[title] => those thoughts
[time] => 2005-09-25 15:42:14
[hometext] => this prolly isnt very good...i threw it together in 3 min...you can like it or not dont bother me any
[bodytext] => those thoughts all come flooding back to me
those thoughts that make me live in misery
those thoughts that make me feel alone,
as if i dont even have a home
those thoughts that make me feel i dont belong
those thoughts that make me wonder where i went wrong
those thoughts that make me wish i knew how to show the pain behind the mask
those thoughts that maek me wish i could change the past
those thoughts that make me cry to sleep at night
those thoughts that make me want to pick up the blade and commit suicide
[comments] => 6
[counter] => 218
[topic] => 65
[informant] => mjh0813
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[alanguage] => english
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[pollID] => 0
[score] => 15
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => toughstuff
)
those thoughts
Contributed by
mjh0813
on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:42:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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those thoughts all come flooding back to me
those thoughts that make me live in misery
those thoughts that make me feel alone,
as if i dont even have a home
those thoughts that make me feel i dont belong
those thoughts that make me wonder where i went wrong
those thoughts that make me wish i knew how to show the pain behind the mask
those thoughts that maek me wish i could change the past
those thoughts that make me cry to sleep at night
those thoughts that make me want to pick up the blade and commit suicide
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Re: those thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:21:45 PM AEST
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Thoughts:
Sometimes we need to learn how to change our fuzzy thinking which can lead to incorrect conclusions.
Some are negative ideas, perhaps being naive or just plain ignorant of why we think this way.
There are all types of self help books on correct thinking, check out some book stores, your library, or click around on the PC, to find out solutions to those problems.
If one gets to the point where their thoughts are haunting them, then its time to go check out why, with a counselor, or other professional doctor and most often they will say, especially after reading this poem, that recognition of the problem to those thoughts are already noticed, and that is good because its when one does not recognize it, then there is a definate problem.
We all have to learn to hang in there, knowing each day is a brand new start. We all have to keep ourselves busy in an activity that we can enjoy, (this is my outlet, poetry), and take the TOO much time off of your hands, get into a lively lifestyle, take a walk or get involved in a club, be it singing, or weight lifting, swimming, running, write poetry as you are, (so glad to see this write, as long as I see you writing, I will be happy,) poetry classes, to name a few. Thinking is not a bad idea, it is just when you start to think negatively about life, is when you have the problem.
A wonderful write that cries out for help, keep writing, always a message away, if you need to talk. Be well,
Raquel Leah :D
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Re: those thoughts
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by autumn_zephyr on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:04:34 PM AEST
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Very nice write, I enjoyed it.
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Re: those thoughts
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by coolbreeze17 on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 12:03:04 AM AEST
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| really like this writing,,went straight to the heart,,.. |
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Re: those thoughts
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 04:50:27 AM AEST
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There's nothing wrong with your writing but it's very sad. It's one thing to feel like using the blade to kill yourself but just don't ever act on it.
Keep writing.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: those thoughts
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by mjh0813 on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 09:50:45 AM AEST
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thanks for commenting on my poem..and i wont act on the last line. ill make that a promise. life is just hard right now and i was raised to act older than i was b/c i was the older sister taking care of 2 kids. even though i aint their mom i feel like i am. illl post a few new pomes soon just have to re wrod them..lol im picky when it comes to my writing, but i aint cutting so im doing good!
love
meghann |
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Re: those thoughts
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by Bruce on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 10:06:13 AM AEST
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| never let those kind of thoughts enter your mind. think on the bright side and try hard to write romantic or very happy poems. |
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