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A knife in my hand,
Sitting on the floor.
The angel will land,
And open a door.

Seeing the tears,
Starting to flood.
Knowing my fears,
All covered in blood.

Death in my mind,
Take me away.
Love I cannot find,
Here I shall lie.

Cuts on my arm,
Friends no more.
From satins charm,
Arm so sore.

The rusted blade,
Dug into me.
Life starts to fade,
Darkness I see.

I call his name,
Wanting to die.
All isn’t the same,
Floating to the sky.

By Fred Smith
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Suicidal Thoughts

Contributed by fredsmith on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 07:39:44 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Suicidal Thoughts

A knife in my hand,
Sitting on the floor.
The angel will land,
And open a door.

Seeing the tears,
Starting to flood.
Knowing my fears,
All covered in blood.

Death in my mind,
Take me away.
Love I cannot find,
Here I shall lie.

Cuts on my arm,
Friends no more.
From satins charm,
Arm so sore.

The rusted blade,
Dug into me.
Life starts to fade,
Darkness I see.

I call his name,
Wanting to die.
All isn’t the same,
Floating to the sky.

By Fred Smith

Copyright © fredsmith ... [ 2005-09-25 19:39:44]
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Re: Suicidal Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 08:08:08 PM AEST
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I pray this is just a poem.

To take your own life, possibly you will not go to heaven. Suicide is not worth it, you do not achieve anything, much more pain if you died that way, say you went to hell, who knows, I am not God..

If you ever need help, or just to talk, pm me, life is beautiful, lots of pain surrounding the beauty, but its beautiful.. It is our responsibility to live out our lives the best way we can, to follow the Gods law, read, Archies poem about Law.. good write...to be of help to all others as we all struggle in our own ways, and each and every person may think there fears and struggles are the worst, just get out, reach out and check out the world, we all need your help, your much loved..

Raquel Leah :D

Re: Suicidal Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by xLSDx on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 09:11:26 PM AEST
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Love it. Great poem. Puts into words what we all think about at times.

x3 Linda

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