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defeasance
Contributed by
weepingprophet
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Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 07:48:42 PM in AEST
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So this is our futile recap
Our intent and shame
The slice of heartbreak
And sacrifice
Divide the lines of time and faith
We believe in this
The bed rest of the locked ward
And small windowed doors
Confined to what we are lacking
Escape, relief
Youre my defeat
Smooth and tender touch
Betray me again
The lust of my own blood
And falling
Youre always calling
Always calling me
Back from the shame of my intentions
The sacrifice, pain, my religion
Youre my defeat
Youre my defeat
The locked ward
Simple escape
I am the product
I hate what I create
The mirror and its lines
The face of an addict wrapped in time
Immovable and only confined
To what
What are we lacking
What am I lacking?
Escape to the relief of you
My defeat
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Re: defeasance
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by Archie on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:53:40 PM AEST
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Here is the same thing in song;
"Look what you've done
You've made a fool out of someone
who thought love was true
but found out that you
were just having fun
why do you want to make me blue
after all I've been good to you"
Not my words although I wish they were.
Quote from "I've been good to you" by Smokey Robinson and the Miracles
You words . . . sigh
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Re: defeasance
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 04:12:27 AM AEST
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| awesome, well done |
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Re: defeasance
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by strider on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:05:19 AM AEST
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| beautiful, very nice piece, keep it up |
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