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Array ( [sid] => 106588 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => you took it [time] => 2005-09-27 08:46:03 [hometext] => comments welcome [bodytext] => you're my snake
in the garden of eden
you took my sunshine
and replaced it with thunder and lightning
you took my blue skies
and painted them grey
now I live in night
as you stole my day
you took my hope
and left me with fear
making me cry
tear after tear
you stole my heart
then broke it in so many ways
yet I'll keep on loving you
'till the end of my days

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you took it

Contributed by xXxmegsxXx on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 08:46:03 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

you're my snake
in the garden of eden
you took my sunshine
and replaced it with thunder and lightning
you took my blue skies
and painted them grey
now I live in night
as you stole my day
you took my hope
and left me with fear
making me cry
tear after tear
you stole my heart
then broke it in so many ways
yet I'll keep on loving you
'till the end of my days

Copyright © xXxmegsxXx ... [ 2005-09-27 08:46:03]
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Re: you took it (User Rating: 1 )
by mjh0813 on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:36:30 AM AEST
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this was a good write.. i can totaly relate to how you feel...i been there more than once and it's very hard to let someone you love go but deep inside your heart you still love them even after what they did...keep writing!
peave and love
meg

Re: you took it (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:12:18 AM AEST
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Oh thats good poem!! And dont worry, we've all been there

*Hugs and kisses*

Kimmy

Re: you took it (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 03:15:56 PM AEST
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A sad poem.No point iin loving someone who can only give you pain.Give him the old heave ho and start again, Ros

Re: you took it (User Rating: 1 )
by jono on Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 08:19:34 AM AEST
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you obviously have a huge heart for love
great poem

Re: you took it (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 05:52:35 PM AEST
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this is a good write.
luvs ya!
jess

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