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Array ( [sid] => 106750 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eleven Dimensions [time] => 2005-09-29 14:49:06 [hometext] => You know what I admire of scientists, they will never accept that they don't know anything, what they will do instead is invent something and then say that very little is known about it. [bodytext] => I was intrigued, to say the least
when it was revealed to me,
a three dimensional world
that we live in, was all lies
there has alway been eleven of them
Oh no, ELEVEN!!?
three of space, one of time
seven branes so subtle,
we don't know anything about
It is said they have curled up in tiny balls
when our world blew up in a big bang
Now the talk of one-brane, two-brane
m-brane and p-brane
is messing up all the strings in my brain
I could hardly manage one or two
three was a bit too much for me
fourth was added a while back, oh my back!
since then I have been so confused
Now they tell me its big ten, plus one
tell me how am I supposed to deal with that?

(I am talking about M-theory there, if you are interested in theoretical physics and for more insights of what is said above check out http://www.fortunecity.com/emachines/e11/86/dimens.html) [comments] => 4 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 7 [informant] => remote [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )
Eleven Dimensions

Contributed by remote on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 02:49:06 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry



I was intrigued, to say the least
when it was revealed to me,
a three dimensional world
that we live in, was all lies
there has alway been eleven of them
Oh no, ELEVEN!!?
three of space, one of time
seven branes so subtle,
we don't know anything about
It is said they have curled up in tiny balls
when our world blew up in a big bang
Now the talk of one-brane, two-brane
m-brane and p-brane
is messing up all the strings in my brain
I could hardly manage one or two
three was a bit too much for me
fourth was added a while back, oh my back!
since then I have been so confused
Now they tell me its big ten, plus one
tell me how am I supposed to deal with that?

(I am talking about M-theory there, if you are interested in theoretical physics and for more insights of what is said above check out http://www.fortunecity.com/emachines/e11/86/dimens.html)




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Re: Eleven Dimensions (User Rating: 1 )
by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 03:12:28 PM AEST
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Dont ya often wonder tho if there is more to this Universe than we know it? It is kinda selfish to think Earth and we as human beings are the only ones in this entire Universe. Yes there are more demensions and this Universe we live in, is most likely a tiny freggle on some greater being.
Dont ya just love theories?

Interesting write. A bit on the funny side it seems. Its different :-)

Hugsss Nats.


Re: Eleven Dimensions (User Rating: 1 )
by ArsenicMyst on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 03:56:14 PM AEST
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its all one can do to just think about cyberspace
let alone hyperspace ...

but string theories kinda sound like fun too ...

good and humorous poem remote ...


¸·:·´Arsenic





Re: Eleven Dimensions (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 04:47:43 PM AEST
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Hey J.,
Good way of putting it... Still you have your perception of the world and if you are okay with what you know why bother with extra knowledge... Besides, there is only one truth...


Re: Eleven Dimensions (User Rating: 1 )
by NDean on Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 08:03:25 AM AEST
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Art and Science combined as one. Very hard to pull off but you did it.
COOL POEM
WELL DONE




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