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Array ( [sid] => 106822 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Erasing Colorado [time] => 2005-09-30 17:15:43 [hometext] => still another one that the title needs work [bodytext] => trying to erase Colorado
wait why erase it
when I don’t mean
anything important
to her ....

I just wish
oh god
why couldn’t
she be the one
why couldn’t
I be her man

I hate being
stuck in neutral
I can’t hate her
I don’t dare love
don’t say it
(I love her)
I know
I don’t mean it

All these emotions
trapped in my heart
but they remain nameless
I deal with my demons
when they have faces
but how do you fight
what you can’t feel

for once I’m silent
I’m so scared
I think they are scheming
for my downfall
but how much further
can I fall?

there’s no light
engulfed in darkness
even my screams
are lost in the pressing
silence
I’m at a loss for words
even the ones
that I dare not say
refuse to aide

what can I say
when she means
nothing in the
grand scheme
of things

so I wish
on a falling star
that I will
face the mirror
and survive
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 75 [informant] => emokid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Erasing Colorado

Contributed by emokid on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 05:15:43 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

trying to erase Colorado
wait why erase it
when I don’t mean
anything important
to her ....

I just wish
oh god
why couldn’t
she be the one
why couldn’t
I be her man

I hate being
stuck in neutral
I can’t hate her
I don’t dare love
don’t say it
(I love her)
I know
I don’t mean it

All these emotions
trapped in my heart
but they remain nameless
I deal with my demons
when they have faces
but how do you fight
what you can’t feel

for once I’m silent
I’m so scared
I think they are scheming
for my downfall
but how much further
can I fall?

there’s no light
engulfed in darkness
even my screams
are lost in the pressing
silence
I’m at a loss for words
even the ones
that I dare not say
refuse to aide

what can I say
when she means
nothing in the
grand scheme
of things

so I wish
on a falling star
that I will
face the mirror
and survive

Copyright Â© emokid ... [ 2005-09-30 17:15:43]
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Re: Erasing Colorado (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 08:58:17 PM AEST
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U r defdinently a gifted, creaTIVE WRITER FRIEND.
HUGGS,
emy

Re: Erasing Colorado (User Rating: 1 )
by ElevenToedSloth on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:45:51 PM AEST
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I like this poem a lot. Wonderous job =)

Re: Erasing Colorado (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 07:38:15 PM AEST
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You are a great writer....You are blessed!
I love this write..
God Bless

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