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the Wall
Contributed by
amos
on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 10:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Through the low streaming influence of darkness
she could feel the rough surface of the wall
All that stood between a path to cross
was the wall in which no one saw
But she was different
and all she could do was watch
She felt the wall breath to her
but she saw others blindly crash
Was she so different
or so special?
No one knew and only she could feel
left in this world surrounded by the wall
Follow the chiseled crack on the wall's exterior
follow it to the heart of a newborn mind
She never wanted to be like this
but she could never handle agonizing attention
Lost in a world surrounded by walls
she felt alone
But being famous
feels lonely.
Copyright ©
amos
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2003-01-19 10:40:00]
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Re: the Wall
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 04:14:05 PM AEST
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Wow... I really liked this this was very well written. This was all so powerful and sad. Great poem.
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