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Guilty
Contributed by
strider
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Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 03:11:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Guilty is not a name I wish to be called
But some frosty idiot forced it on me
If you have wronged all
You may call on me
Perchance you may be set free
So I have always lived in fear
For I feed amongst evil minded men
Who find gloating joy knowing my existence
been beating a countless time by men
been reprimanded a countless time by appearance
Because men like you choose to say I am guilty
And the jailers have not shown any pity
Know you not other ways to say yes
Know you not how to say yes and be terse?
How must you deliver false judgement on my hands?
Now I must run to foreign and distant lands
They too wait upon my arrival
They too have criminal minds and their rivals
I have no hiding place
Guilty must die in sorrows grave
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strider
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2005-10-07 03:11:02]
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Re: Guilty
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 11:02:25 AM AEST
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Guilt... seems like a simple subject, but in reality is very complex. Without knowing what the story is, it seems like you've addressed a lot of aspects of judgement and guilt with this. Interesting choosing of voice. It works well.
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Re: Guilty
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by brew on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 06:16:20 PM AEST
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Well guilt, can cause lots of grief, even if its not realism. We all do that, from time, to times, on our self.! Sucks, huh? Im ONE who does that.and it kills me. Good write, tho, and dont beat YOURSELF up.!
Brew~ |
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