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Array ( [sid] => 107309 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => cant sleep [time] => 2005-10-08 02:22:10 [hometext] => .....its such a weird feeling..... [bodytext] => eyes are heavy

burnning and red

playing with emotions

inside my head

take the invisable tape of my eyelids

i feel that they need to shut

but they dont

a horible feeling is inside my gut

rolling around

trying to sleep

but all that i do

is get tangled in the sheet

hands shaking

sweat dripping from every poor

i stand up out of bed and try to reach for the door

being weak my hand trembals and falls to my side

i lay back in my bed

for another insomniatic ride

laying in a pool of shadows

eyes dry from looking for sleep

they close for a second

but my insomnia is to deep

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cant sleep

Contributed by hopefades on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 02:22:10 AM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

eyes are heavy

burnning and red

playing with emotions

inside my head

take the invisable tape of my eyelids

i feel that they need to shut

but they dont

a horible feeling is inside my gut

rolling around

trying to sleep

but all that i do

is get tangled in the sheet

hands shaking

sweat dripping from every poor

i stand up out of bed and try to reach for the door

being weak my hand trembals and falls to my side

i lay back in my bed

for another insomniatic ride

laying in a pool of shadows

eyes dry from looking for sleep

they close for a second

but my insomnia is to deep

Copyright © hopefades ... [ 2005-10-08 02:22:10]
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Re: cant sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 02:28:31 AM AEST
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Really like this and wow, how I can relate...damn sleepless nights. Grrr....good poem :)

Thanks for sharing.

Tim
:)

Re: cant sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 11:37:37 AM AEST
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not being able to sleep suck major butt. I def. know this one can be sucktacular. Great write.

-Jen

Re: cant sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by shortcut on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 08:36:05 AM AEST
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How true- did you know over half the population suffers from insomnia at times?
I suffer a lot!:) loved the flow of your words, good writing here- keep up the good work!

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