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bury me
Contributed by
nate
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Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 02:59:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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wont you please, bury me, let me sleep below the dirt, cause you know, all, that i can be, cause you just wont let me be anything, just try, give up everything, and make the most of what we have, but what, is it to me, but a burnt up book in used bookstores, i will never look again, never try to be who i am, never move the same way twice, just give up my chance of life, could you move the world so fast, that you slip under the speed the ground moves, end up deep beneath the surface, or maybe i should bury you, deep in me, so you could see, everything you meant to me, but i am, worthless, i am pained and hurt, i am, so confused, i am, subtley abused, i am, over dramatic, i am stuck in a panic, i am, crossing over to the other side, and i could die. . .
would it matter?
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Re: bury me
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnaBanana on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 08:07:33 PM AEST (User
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u did a great job showing emotions through the words u chose, i really like this poem a lot, sometimes i feel like this too and u did a good job, i could never have put that kind of thing into words as u did |
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