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Array ( [sid] => 107330 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A navy pagans wish [time] => 2005-10-08 13:36:46 [hometext] => joined the navy and i'm a pagan. i'm strong but sometimes i want to be weak. but most of all i need a love that will except all of me. [bodytext] => stand on the edge, of the end of my past
growing old leaving my childhood behind fast
mom i love you and i wanted to you to know
with you is home no matter how far away i go

the summer went so fast and then i was gone
my most sincere apologisey to any who feel wronged
i'm all grown up and looking for my own new life
wishing to be a child once more so as to leave the strife

gods answer my one plea, as all alone i stand
let me find one to love, some to hold my hand
navy blue and a pentagram are my color and shield
yet i need a love that will never yield

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A navy pagans wish

Contributed by sonic_phoenix on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 01:36:46 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

stand on the edge, of the end of my past
growing old leaving my childhood behind fast
mom i love you and i wanted to you to know
with you is home no matter how far away i go

the summer went so fast and then i was gone
my most sincere apologisey to any who feel wronged
i'm all grown up and looking for my own new life
wishing to be a child once more so as to leave the strife

gods answer my one plea, as all alone i stand
let me find one to love, some to hold my hand
navy blue and a pentagram are my color and shield
yet i need a love that will never yield

Copyright © sonic_phoenix ... [ 2005-10-08 13:36:46]
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Re: A navy pagans wish (User Rating: 1 )
by SunflowersAndTea on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 02:11:04 PM AEST
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hmm. this poem just seems a little insecure, just in the way you express yourself. it seems that you are looking for something you fear you will never have, and the whole pagan thing seems like a cover up for maybe something you are missing....

why pagan? do you feel that for some reason it can help you be able to give and recieve the love you so desperatey wish???

Re: A navy pagans wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 02:50:06 PM AEST
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Beautiful write..

You prayed, open up just a little wider to receive your prayer.. amen..

Raquel Leah :D

Re: A navy pagans wish (User Rating: 1 )
by ziggy on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 02:59:45 PM AEST
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Good stuff....has that leaving home feel to it.

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