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I wonder why I’m in this race.
The trials, the problems, and the mistakes I make.
It all seems kind of pointless kind of fake.
I fear that only more sorrows come ahead.
And they will keep coming till the day I am dead.

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Bad Day

Contributed by wesmaun on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 07:34:16 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

As I sit here tears stream down my face.
I wonder why I’m in this race.
The trials, the problems, and the mistakes I make.
It all seems kind of pointless kind of fake.
I fear that only more sorrows come ahead.
And they will keep coming till the day I am dead.

Copyright Â© wesmaun ... [ 2005-10-08 19:34:16]
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Re: Bad Day (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 07:46:59 PM AEST
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Sorry, the day went bad.....we all have that from time, to time.! Things have to get bad, before they go back to good.! Try smiling.....it does make ppl wondering, what you are thinking.....................

Brew~

Re: Bad Day (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 08:49:41 PM AEST
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maybe think like this....
having a bad day -helps- us appreciate the good days....
I liked your feelings as I can relate...on my -bad days...
coni

Re: Bad Day (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 10:06:08 PM AEST
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i hope that that day didn't last very long!! cause, you don't make just mistakes... this poem was NOT a mistake, that was truely awesome!! i loved it, and all of my days are like that. i hope you have healed from that day!
but, i truely enjoyed that and hope you keep writing!!

~sprints

Re: Bad Day (User Rating: 1 )
by zalzool on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 10:42:17 PM AEST
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man dont worry bout it ...
i guess it was just a bad day as from the other comments everyone has bad days
iv been havin a bad 6 months but look on the bright side they can only go good ...
and besides everyone makes mistakes
think of all the good things uv done

Re: Bad Day (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 06:36:29 AM AEST
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It has been a bad day,now put it all behind
Look towards the future and the fun that you can find
Don't be so down hearted, we're all here just to share
Oh, I want you just to now how much I really care

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