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Or where they’ve left their trace
And can you tell, you broke my heart
By the look upon my face

And can you see the sadness
Your words have brought to bear
And do you know the pain you’ve caused
Or do you really care

Can you know the feelings
Within my wounded soul
Can you see as words once said
Brings about their toll

And do you see the tears
Or where they’ve left their trace
And can you see just what your words
Have brought about to place

And do you know the horror
That there is inside
To face again the morrow
In a world where I must hide

And do you think about it
Or if that you would dare
To think upon your actions
And wonder if they’re fair

To toss aside another heart
And leave it lay to bleed
To make again another start
To fill your wonton need

So can you see tears
Or where they left their trace
As you walk upon this broken man
You’ve left up in my place [comments] => 4 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 48 [informant] => wordsy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Care you not.

Contributed by wordsy on Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Do you see the tears
Or where they’ve left their trace
And can you tell, you broke my heart
By the look upon my face

And can you see the sadness
Your words have brought to bear
And do you know the pain you’ve caused
Or do you really care

Can you know the feelings
Within my wounded soul
Can you see as words once said
Brings about their toll

And do you see the tears
Or where they’ve left their trace
And can you see just what your words
Have brought about to place

And do you know the horror
That there is inside
To face again the morrow
In a world where I must hide

And do you think about it
Or if that you would dare
To think upon your actions
And wonder if they’re fair

To toss aside another heart
And leave it lay to bleed
To make again another start
To fill your wonton need

So can you see tears
Or where they left their trace
As you walk upon this broken man
You’ve left up in my place

Copyright Â© wordsy ... [ 2003-01-19 18:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Care you not. (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 06:02:47 PM AEST
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I have been there ...very strong sentiment ...good write

Sharon

Re: Care you not. (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 06:17:07 PM AEST
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Fantastic wordsy! Such deep pain resounds in this write. Well done! Larry

Re: Care you not. (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 05:44:18 AM AEST
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Great poem ... love this ... can relate so well.

Re: Care you not. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 07:20:49 PM AEST
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Oh...I loved this.... lovely write, wordsy..
Jenni

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