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Array ( [sid] => 107419 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thank You [time] => 2005-10-10 00:42:19 [hometext] => I wrote this for my bf. I never thought I would be this happy again. :) [bodytext] => I am at a loss,
What am I to do?
I’m so afraid of what I feel,
And I’m so in love with you.

I did not intend to happen,
This thing that passed between us,
I made a promise this past heartbreak,
That no love for me was must.

But when you stepped into my life,
My world turned upside down,
You made me happy once again,
And wiped away my frown.

I don’t know how to thank you,
It’s true a gift you gave,
You taught a girl with no more trust,
That her heart could still be saved.

You taught this girl to love again,
In spite of all my fears,
You held me in your arms so close,
And wiped away my tears.

You just want me to be happy,
You’re unselfish in your ways,
So thanks again I give,
I’ll love you all my days.
___________________________________________________________________
P.S. :)
Thank you much for loving me,
And keeping me a part,
Of your life so special,
I love you with my heart.

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Thank You

Contributed by redtempest13 on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 12:42:19 AM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems

I am at a loss,
What am I to do?
I’m so afraid of what I feel,
And I’m so in love with you.

I did not intend to happen,
This thing that passed between us,
I made a promise this past heartbreak,
That no love for me was must.

But when you stepped into my life,
My world turned upside down,
You made me happy once again,
And wiped away my frown.

I don’t know how to thank you,
It’s true a gift you gave,
You taught a girl with no more trust,
That her heart could still be saved.

You taught this girl to love again,
In spite of all my fears,
You held me in your arms so close,
And wiped away my tears.

You just want me to be happy,
You’re unselfish in your ways,
So thanks again I give,
I’ll love you all my days.
___________________________________________________________________
P.S. :)
Thank you much for loving me,
And keeping me a part,
Of your life so special,
I love you with my heart.

Copyright Â© redtempest13 ... [ 2005-10-10 00:42:19]
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Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by strider on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 03:16:33 AM AEST
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this is a very good poem and to think you had no more believe in love. Well love has captured you again, welcome back to the wonderful world of L-O-V-E.

Enjoy it and hope it last forever.

Felix

Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 03:39:00 PM AEST
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Beautiful sweet sentiments, so very cleary right from ones heart.

This was truly delightful. Touched my inside as I read each verse. You realy emphasise the impact of your love.

Very nice and made for an excellent breath taking read. 5/5

SweetRhythm

Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 09:57:11 AM AEST
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i have done the same thing....swore to myself that i would not trust, not love...but then i fell again. it's good to fall in love...and it's not the fall that kills you...it's when you hit the ground...so i hope that you continue to fall, and when you come close to the ground, i hope he is there to catch you

great write

- Beth -

Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by JockPhillips on Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 09:36:02 PM AEST
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Now what was I to do? She's crying over me and she was feeling blue. I said don't cry dry your eyes and hear comes your mother. And it was good like this poem is good too and keep it up!

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