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Array ( [sid] => 107450 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Say the Word [time] => 2005-10-10 13:07:01 [hometext] => Betrayal's silence never spoke so loudly [bodytext] => Say the word
Bring these stolen dreams crashing down
Crack the utopian sky and watch it fall
In black tear's waters, watching yesterday drown

Hear your rehearsed sentiments reach innocent ears
Silence bleeds as the forsaken cry
Tomorrow's strangers fade into an empty promise
Quiet sounds as the innocence dies

Hear the foundation crumble
Emotion breaks through this hollow hello
Say the words, blasphemous credulity
The dreamer's rescue lost in purity's shadow

Silent, these souls who cried into the blackness
Internal screams never heard
Innocent eyes bleed tears, pleading you not to
Say the word [comments] => 3 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 75 [informant] => UnfallenTears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Say the Word

Contributed by UnfallenTears on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 01:07:01 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Say the word
Bring these stolen dreams crashing down
Crack the utopian sky and watch it fall
In black tear's waters, watching yesterday drown

Hear your rehearsed sentiments reach innocent ears
Silence bleeds as the forsaken cry
Tomorrow's strangers fade into an empty promise
Quiet sounds as the innocence dies

Hear the foundation crumble
Emotion breaks through this hollow hello
Say the words, blasphemous credulity
The dreamer's rescue lost in purity's shadow

Silent, these souls who cried into the blackness
Internal screams never heard
Innocent eyes bleed tears, pleading you not to
Say the word

Copyright © UnfallenTears ... [ 2005-10-10 13:07:01]
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Re: Say the Word (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 01:17:42 PM AEST
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Well constructed! I love the way you use the beginning phrase at the end, but with the opposite desire. Well done.
Take care.
David

Re: Say the Word (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:29:32 AM AEST
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Well written.. I liked it. the flow was smooth and it was a really great write...

christina

Re: Say the Word (User Rating: 1 )
by mysticaldancer on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 02:02:30 PM AEST
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once again, a really good poem, but is it about who i think it is? (PP)?

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