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[title] => Olde Man
[time] => 2005-10-11 19:04:00
[hometext] => My first attempt at a post like this, I wanted an old feel to the words ... I think I like it, Nah ... I know I do
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Olde Man
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Nazmythian
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Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 07:04:00 PM in AEST
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Re: Olde Man
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 07:10:49 PM AEST
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| This rocks Naz-man! The words are great and the presentation is so cool it's freezing!!! |
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Re: Olde Man
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 07:12:31 PM AEST
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WOW Scotty! This is great! never mind the brilliance
of the poem itself, but the thought provoking
poetry within the picture is absolutely incredible!
Perfectly blended, dear. This is wonderful...damn I
wish I could adequately express myself, as this
magnificent creation demands!
Amazed.....
~Breezy
p.s. yep....socks definitely rocked off you clever wizard! |
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Re: Olde Man
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 07:13:02 PM AEST
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Wow, Nazzy. This is definatly one of your best.
I love the words you used, and even the AABB rhyme. Not many can do it very well, you have done it really well though.
The picture goes really well, too, though I normally prefer imagining a poem in my head, this works really well.
Great job, my friend.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Olde Man
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 08:53:18 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem... so good... I enjoyed it very much... you are a great poet.
amber |
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Re: Olde Man
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:13:20 PM AEST
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| I like this. It looks like you put a lot of time into it. The meaning of the poem is deep and soul stirring. The picture just brings it out more. |
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Re: Olde Man
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by xPixiexDustx on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:20:43 PM AEST
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| Wow! I love this, very well expressed. Love the presentation. Greaaat job! =) |
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Re: Olde Man
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:14:56 AM AEST
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I saw this as soon as it posted and was quite literally blown away. From both a technical and creative perspective... it's entirely fabulous. Philly's right... it is definitely one of your best. And that --- given the quality of the work you have posted on this site --- is saying an awful lot.
I absolutely love this. To be honest, I'm a bit of a hard sell when it comes to included graphics... I'm normally overly picky about the picture, sometimes disappointed in the write (thinking not enough care was taken with the words for having gotten distracted by choosing/including a picture), etc. But this... this is unbelievably good in all regards. Exceptional write... and beautifully presented!!!!
~Snemmy
(who knew the very minute she saw it that she would be heading the Best Poem of the Day... ) |
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Re: Olde Man
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 09:47:31 AM AEST
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OHMYGOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was just outstanding Nazzy; you painted your feelings well with this piece. Even without the picture you could truly identify the meaning of each word and syllable.
I love the presentation as well. This is something new you've taped into and I like it.
Jane~
*Thinking Philly and Christine *grins* were right on calling this your best work so far.*
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Re: Olde Man
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 10:23:13 AM AEST
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Well good sir, need I say anything more then that which has already been said?...yes, need I must!
What helps this piece along is that the flow , rhythmn and rhyme are so well done. They take nothing away from the content of the piece...which is exceptional! There is such a feeling of age and wisdom here. I often use the word crafted to describe a great piece, but I want to add the word "blended", because that is what you have done so well. You have taken many great facets and blended them together into this fantastic work of art.
Removes cap and bows, and with sweeping gesture replaces cap on head..Incredible Nazzy!! |
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Re: Olde Man
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 11:45:25 AM AEST
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This was a masterpiece. The picture within the words superb
Beautiful
Love Angelxx |
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Re: Olde Man
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 04:19:40 PM AEST
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Naz,
It's hard to put into words how awesome this poem is. The graphics in combination with the verse and rhyme all blend so perfectly. I find your talent humbling, yet inspiring. I tried writing a poem on aging a while back, but couldn't come up with anything I liked. Well I love this poem, Nazzy
Fantastic write, I sometimes wonder why you don't get published.
Will/Terry |
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Re: Olde Man
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 06:09:22 AM AEST
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'my first attempt at a post like this'
'a post like this'?..This is a gem of a post.
Seems that you almost want to defend the style in which you have written...why?
This is an excellent poem,with which,I am now well acquainted and it is certainly going into my favourites file,
Den
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