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no one's with me on the plain
Keep my guns deep in the ground
I can't tell what's in my name

Push me through revolving doors
meet me on my falling star
Keep my car straight on the road
I can't my feel through my heart's tar

Spill the hourglass
mention grave
Save the hour past
i can't crave

Shed your wool and bare sharp teeth
i know i've met my match in Hell
Further from the sun i rot
but that's just not for me to tell

I have no bones for love to pick
i burned up sometime long before
The attic creaks and here i sit
writing words that mean no more.

dw

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Meet me on a falling star

Contributed by In_a_while on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 12:20:55 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I spend my time black in the sun
no one's with me on the plain
Keep my guns deep in the ground
I can't tell what's in my name

Push me through revolving doors
meet me on my falling star
Keep my car straight on the road
I can't my feel through my heart's tar

Spill the hourglass
mention grave
Save the hour past
i can't crave

Shed your wool and bare sharp teeth
i know i've met my match in Hell
Further from the sun i rot
but that's just not for me to tell

I have no bones for love to pick
i burned up sometime long before
The attic creaks and here i sit
writing words that mean no more.

dw

Copyright © In_a_while ... [ 2005-10-13 12:20:55]
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Re: Meet me on a falling star (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 04:32:24 PM AEST
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each word paints a picture of emotional beauty

Michelle

Re: Meet me on a falling star (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 12:56:41 AM AEST
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It's a testament dw...
a bit forced with the rhyme..
but a testament..

My say is, feel and go..
loved it jus' the same...

Billy

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