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depending on nothing but my blood and knife
streaks of dark color stained across my wrists
convincing myself that i do not exist
cover the evidence with wristbands and sleeves
this heartache inside one cannot concieve
a fright and a frailty bruised into my soul
makes my heart stop and spirit go cold
relax my lonliness, arms draped in the sink
try to hold the chain but its missing a link
feeling so empty i miss you too much
relying on the knife as my harmful crutch

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My Harmful Crutch

Contributed by blue_angel on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 12:49:16 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

a careless and hopeless and miserable life
depending on nothing but my blood and knife
streaks of dark color stained across my wrists
convincing myself that i do not exist
cover the evidence with wristbands and sleeves
this heartache inside one cannot concieve
a fright and a frailty bruised into my soul
makes my heart stop and spirit go cold
relax my lonliness, arms draped in the sink
try to hold the chain but its missing a link
feeling so empty i miss you too much
relying on the knife as my harmful crutch

Copyright © blue_angel ... [ 2005-10-14 12:49:16]
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Re: My Harmful Crutch (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 02:56:24 PM AEST
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It occurs to me that if you're cutting across your wrists...you're not doing it right anyway lol...

Re: My Harmful Crutch (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:13:34 PM AEST
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there is many better ways to get attention then putting lines across your wrists
r.m.wilder

Re: My Harmful Crutch (User Rating: 1 )
by SylviaWalters on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 12:46:36 AM AEST
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very nice poem, i know how you feel. hang in there, people may try to make you stop, but somehow i get the feeling you don't want to..

Re: My Harmful Crutch (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 09:54:04 PM AEST
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jennie! what happened to make u cut yourself more?? what about on friday when we were laughing about the stupid lock and roses?? what happened? Why do you feel this way?? we're pulling AWAY from the dark ages, remember?? plz, don't hurt yourself, jennie. call and talk to me. i'm here, no matter what. really, i am. just plz, take care of yourself.

good write though. hope that's all it is!

sending you lots of hugs and prayers
~sprints (your BFF until the end)

Re: My Harmful Crutch (User Rating: 1 )
by Kazzy1231 on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 06:12:47 AM AEST
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Great write,I feel a bit like that.

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