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Array ( [sid] => 108035 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What we once had [time] => 2005-10-18 21:49:24 [hometext] => I just wrote this in a perspective of my own and someone else's. Someone that I wont forget... [bodytext] => The end we have finally met
Distance forms bewtween us
Love vanishes from your heart
Never gave me a chance
You left me in the darkness
All you ever wanted
Was someone to hold
Someone who would love you
I was once that someone
But you gave that away
But deep down inside your lonely heart
You still have feelings
Now I long to see your face
Cant put you to the side
Your standing there
Feeling lost and lonely
The feelings start to come back
Hitting you like a stone
You look around
Only wanting to see me
But im gone
A tear flows down your cheek
It hits the ground
As I once did
When you let me go
I fell from your heart
But now you regret
That im gone
Cant change a thing
Your falling apart
Wishing that I was near you
Wanting to lay your head on my chest
Just to hear my heartbeat
As we lay there
When you feel lonely
Think of me
We were meant to be
But you tore us apart
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 52 [informant] => LostInLife [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
What we once had

Contributed by LostInLife on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 09:49:24 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



The end we have finally met
Distance forms bewtween us
Love vanishes from your heart
Never gave me a chance
You left me in the darkness
All you ever wanted
Was someone to hold
Someone who would love you
I was once that someone
But you gave that away
But deep down inside your lonely heart
You still have feelings
Now I long to see your face
Cant put you to the side
Your standing there
Feeling lost and lonely
The feelings start to come back
Hitting you like a stone
You look around
Only wanting to see me
But im gone
A tear flows down your cheek
It hits the ground
As I once did
When you let me go
I fell from your heart
But now you regret
That im gone
Cant change a thing
Your falling apart
Wishing that I was near you
Wanting to lay your head on my chest
Just to hear my heartbeat
As we lay there
When you feel lonely
Think of me
We were meant to be
But you tore us apart




Copyright © LostInLife ... [ 2005-10-18 21:49:24]
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Re: What we once had (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 08:53:19 AM AEST
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This was truly touching. I give you a standing applause for that. Beautiful. You chose the words well.
May the separation be breakable.
Take care.
David


Re: What we once had (User Rating: 1 )
by Kazzy1231 on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 04:00:50 PM AEST
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Nice write,Please check out some of my poems!




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