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[aid] => mick
[title] => Emotions on a chemical break down
[time] => 2005-10-19 07:17:45
[hometext] => I wrote this really high & sad 5 mounths ago after a blew-it with the girl of my dreams. I wish I could submitte art becase theres a cool pic I drew to go along with it.I just started writing so bare with me. Thanks
[bodytext] => Emotions on a chemical hideous Writing in pieces for a trouble puzzled mind These is my puzzle poem. & these are the directions . You must start with each side separately. Then combine left to right At the end read Read again combining right to left. Then anyway you please (Me) (her) A hole in the dam No remorse With no direction Rushing to gather Flooding the domain once relied on the nourishment Walls breaking free .horror fills the eyes of the on looker Flee for shelter .....You cant swim Leave ...................Now flowing in old paths You have no option .consuming all hope There are no channels .lying in the shadows Clearing everything .into the abyss All I see is soil ground and destruction ..The standards raise Flaws over looked In reckless abandon From rushed construction Time can heal Surch for fault ......words gather like clouds But the emptiness overwhelms A selfish glance Realizing the volume ..Thats been released Fault foundation ...Must prevent the past Throe and precise .at all coast I rebuild with the sands of time .rain clouds and regrets Rain will come .......to many lies Replenishing with each cloud tell full again .A pain full memory Will the walls hold this time .leading the way [comments] => 1 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 43 [informant] => ddannyc [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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