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Array ( [sid] => 108086 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ignorant whore. [time] => 2005-10-19 20:45:01 [hometext] => had to get it out. feeling really awful. [bodytext] => hanging heavy, hearts are low
head to toe
read like a book.
labeled a hoe.
walked into this world playing with disaster
only to turn this heart cold faster.
shed my tears
bleed into the sun
ill never be number one.

love the whore
now can you tell her
whats the score?
deciet in your eyes.

what are you looking for?
lover your mine
lets intertwine

i learned long ago
these lies.. are only half the show.

...to me
what do you bestow?

feed me the poison
i'll drink till the glass is dry
you think you need the lie.
honest i knew it all along...
this was wrong.

i wanted this to last
failure to pass..
this was wrong
i knew it all along.

knowledge i ignore.
ignorance is failure to unlock this door.
the key to me heart
between my legs..

looking for love in all the wrong places.
in all the wrong faces.
deciet. deciet
thats your treat
your treat to me..
deciet
love blankets the lies.

tell me tell me...

whats the score?

you

ignorant

whore.


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ignorant whore.

Contributed by bttrflynajar on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 08:45:01 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



hanging heavy, hearts are low
head to toe
read like a book.
labeled a hoe.
walked into this world playing with disaster
only to turn this heart cold faster.
shed my tears
bleed into the sun
ill never be number one.

love the whore
now can you tell her
whats the score?
deciet in your eyes.

what are you looking for?
lover your mine
lets intertwine

i learned long ago
these lies.. are only half the show.

...to me
what do you bestow?

feed me the poison
i'll drink till the glass is dry
you think you need the lie.
honest i knew it all along...
this was wrong.

i wanted this to last
failure to pass..
this was wrong
i knew it all along.

knowledge i ignore.
ignorance is failure to unlock this door.
the key to me heart
between my legs..

looking for love in all the wrong places.
in all the wrong faces.
deciet. deciet
thats your treat
your treat to me..
deciet
love blankets the lies.

tell me tell me...

whats the score?

you

ignorant

whore.






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Re: ignorant whore. (User Rating: 1 )
by weepingprophet on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 01:25:34 AM AEST
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the thought and prevailing imagery throughout this peice is stunning. I loved it. I enjoyed the progression and the emotion in this peice. Truly beautiful.

~when all is said and done, you're the simple blade pressing against my flesh. i am the fool for never trying to stop you~weepingprophet


Re: ignorant whore. (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 04:46:54 PM AEST
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Outstanding, the imagery and verses were written amazingly well. I love it.

~ Riisa




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