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Array ( [sid] => 108279 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death it's Twilight Time [time] => 2005-10-22 23:33:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Deaf as a a door nail
My blood pools and clots around me
I am here alive
Still are the nights as I still
Weep out
Calling
Who am I
Trying to wish these life long ambitions away

All of of a sudden somethings put me in a fog
I heard it had too hurt and make ya bleed
You need to listen to me
I was then at awakening by a sudden a change from within.

As it gave itself as drinks to me
the sounds that filled from within me
Help make a weak voice try to repent

What were you when you said
out of jest
As we casually scoffed at his warning
The Proof
I believe was proven
is the great many deaths
No telling No warning
Just a flip of a coin

Its the ignorance of such idiot fools
loose without thinking
like you , me and them .

Death its Twilight time again

Whisper [comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Whisper [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Death it's Twilight Time

Contributed by Whisper on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 11:33:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Deaf as a a door nail
My blood pools and clots around me
I am here alive
Still are the nights as I still
Weep out
Calling
Who am I
Trying to wish these life long ambitions away

All of of a sudden somethings put me in a fog
I heard it had too hurt and make ya bleed
You need to listen to me
I was then at awakening by a sudden a change from within.

As it gave itself as drinks to me
the sounds that filled from within me
Help make a weak voice try to repent

What were you when you said
out of jest
As we casually scoffed at his warning
The Proof
I believe was proven
is the great many deaths
No telling No warning
Just a flip of a coin

Its the ignorance of such idiot fools
loose without thinking
like you , me and them .

Death its Twilight time again

Whisper

Copyright © Whisper ... [ 2005-10-22 23:33:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Death it's Twilight Time (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 11:49:59 AM AEST
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I dig this off balanced flow
unique style

Re: Death it's Twilight Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Uncertain_Oblivion on Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 11:39:42 AM AEST
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This was very cool. I liked it.

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