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Deception Kicks In
Contributed by
BurriedByMyLies
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Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 06:06:20 PM in AEST
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Finally, I dont know you,
With a mind full of thoughts, they are your own,
But the moment I saw you,
Naive, it showed, I knew you had no clue,
But if only you had known,
That Id have to end up confusing you...
You think you know me, but do you really,
My psyche, I show you dissemblingly,
I play with your head, what I reveal is untrue,
I have a different mask, for every one of you,
And when I put on the right one, deception kicks in,
Idiot! Youll see what Ive done, when you look within...
And so finally we talk,
Yes, now the true battle begins,
Youll break, like a piece of chalk,
When faced with all my different skins,
All youll do is stare and gawk,
At my wicked mind, as it grins...
You think you know me, but do you really,
My psyche, I show you dissemblingly,
I play with your head, what I reveal is untrue,
I have a different mask, for every one of you,
And when I put on the right one, deception kicks in,
Idiot! Youll see what Ive done, when you look within...
Now you are where I want you,
I can cut open the thoughts in your mind,
And take what I want from you,
Cause you cant even see me, worse than blind,
See, I knew that Id break you,
Confuse you, like all the rest of your kind...
You think you know me, but do you really,
My psyche, I show you dissemblingly,
I play with your head, what I reveal is untrue,
I have a different mask, for every one of you,
And when I put on the right one, deception kicks in,
Idiot! Youll see what Ive done, when you look within...
Like all the ones before you,
You have promptly been victimized,
And now that youve agonized,
I just patiently discard you,
You dont even realize,
What my mind has stolen from you...
When our battle began, I knew Id be the winner,
Cause unlike yours, my mind is one of a deceiver,
And what you lacked, like all the others in fact,
Was a mind of your own,
But yours had cracked, and waited on mine to act,
Because of that, youre thrown,
To exile, because of me, the manipulator,
And I want you to remember, I am the winner...
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Re: Deception Kicks In
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 07:16:03 PM AEST
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good lines, good rhymes, a little long winded in repeating the chorus as i would call it though..I would used the long original stanza once and take the two times that it is repeatd and changed those parts to something smaller, shorter, something that would make the change from stanza to stanza a little more smooth...such as instead of the entire stanza: "Another Mask ~ Deception kicks in",
and move on to the next stanza..just a thought, good job
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Re: Deception Kicks In
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by aprilrose on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:30:15 AM AEST
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| i loved this peice i think it is very well written and perfect i love the like chorus would be a great song :)aprilrose |
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