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Array ( [sid] => 108394 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tiny Little Moment [time] => 2005-10-24 21:13:51 [hometext] => A piece dedicated to a special someone who doesn't know how I feel. [bodytext] =>
I love those first seconds, when I wake up in the morning,
That tiny little moment, when I haven’t started crying,
I cherish that moment, just before I can start thinking,
Because it’s the only time of day, I don’t feel like dying...

And now my day begins, I dread the moment I’ll see you,
Because when we start talking, I just can’t tell what you’re thinking,
Sometimes I think you like me so much that you’ll pursue,
Others it seems that you would just love to see me vanishing...

Here we go, I spot you, and all the while I’m wondering,
If this time will be like yesterday, do you feel like crying,
Or are you in a joyful mood, anxiously awaiting,
The moment I’ll come over and talk to you once more, smiling...

I don’t want to be left in the cold again, I want you,
Please, even if you’re not ready, stop beeing so confusing,
Take your time, but realize that I desperatly need you,
And give me a sign, that will show, and make me stop wondering...

I hate those last seconds, before I go to sleep at night,
That tiny little moment, when I realize I’m crying,
I despize that moment, when I can’t seem to stop thinking,
Because it’s the time of day, when I really feel like dying...
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Tiny Little Moment

Contributed by BurriedByMyLies on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 09:13:51 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove




I love those first seconds, when I wake up in the morning,
That tiny little moment, when I haven’t started crying,
I cherish that moment, just before I can start thinking,
Because it’s the only time of day, I don’t feel like dying...

And now my day begins, I dread the moment I’ll see you,
Because when we start talking, I just can’t tell what you’re thinking,
Sometimes I think you like me so much that you’ll pursue,
Others it seems that you would just love to see me vanishing...

Here we go, I spot you, and all the while I’m wondering,
If this time will be like yesterday, do you feel like crying,
Or are you in a joyful mood, anxiously awaiting,
The moment I’ll come over and talk to you once more, smiling...

I don’t want to be left in the cold again, I want you,
Please, even if you’re not ready, stop beeing so confusing,
Take your time, but realize that I desperatly need you,
And give me a sign, that will show, and make me stop wondering...

I hate those last seconds, before I go to sleep at night,
That tiny little moment, when I realize I’m crying,
I despize that moment, when I can’t seem to stop thinking,
Because it’s the time of day, when I really feel like dying...




Copyright © BurriedByMyLies ... [ 2005-10-24 21:13:51]
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Re: Tiny Little Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by craigcully on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 09:44:51 PM AEST
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I know how you feel, as I am in a similar situation, and you do run all those questions and thoughts through your head when you see that somebody... it's a crazy feeling.

craig


Re: Tiny Little Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by aprilrose on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:24:07 AM AEST
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awwwww the person needs to tell you soo sweet great poem wish you luck with the person your trying to pursue:) aprilrose


Re: Tiny Little Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by needs_change on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 02:38:33 PM AEST
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you hit the nail on the head. i know how ya feel. great job. keep up the good work.




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