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Array ( [sid] => 108477 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FaLLen Black Rain [time] => 2005-10-25 23:51:39 [hometext] => Fallen from the sky darken and bleak rain will fall staining the way [bodytext] => Drips slowly run down the window
Emphasizing and exaggerating the slow pass of time
Darkness beyond my window panes
Sun, it's scorching rays burn fire across the grass
Alighting in a blinding flash, the droplets on my window
Burning now past all doubts or thoughts of impossibility
Catching fire in a blaze of passion
The fire glinting in life before fading
Leaving a barron wasteland on an empty sun
I look away from this site before me
My eyes drawn back to the streaks on my window panes
Squinting now, the clear, sad drops are black
Burned beyond all thoughts of improbability
The contrast of a bleak world made black and white in a second
Determination brought on in a burning streak
Shining in the waning light the drops begin to fall
Burnt and tortured they run down the window
Slowly, these shimmering drops of black rain. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 13 [informant] => MysticFireFairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

FaLLen Black Rain

Contributed by MysticFireFairy on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 11:51:39 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Drips slowly run down the window
Emphasizing and exaggerating the slow pass of time
Darkness beyond my window panes
Sun, it's scorching rays burn fire across the grass
Alighting in a blinding flash, the droplets on my window
Burning now past all doubts or thoughts of impossibility
Catching fire in a blaze of passion
The fire glinting in life before fading
Leaving a barron wasteland on an empty sun
I look away from this site before me
My eyes drawn back to the streaks on my window panes
Squinting now, the clear, sad drops are black
Burned beyond all thoughts of improbability
The contrast of a bleak world made black and white in a second
Determination brought on in a burning streak
Shining in the waning light the drops begin to fall
Burnt and tortured they run down the window
Slowly, these shimmering drops of black rain.

Copyright © MysticFireFairy ... [ 2005-10-25 23:51:39]
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Re: FaLLen Black Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 03:25:39 AM AEST
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deep and moving write. I feel there is something lying below the surface of this very personal. Vivid images throughout.

Michelle

Re: FaLLen Black Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 07:27:39 AM AEST
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very powerful, filled with such emotion

Re: FaLLen Black Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by xanix on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 02:10:58 PM AEST
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That was very well ritten I liked it a lot

Re: FaLLen Black Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 12:30:47 PM AEST
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another masterpeice u do dark very well it's most becoming on u . . .

(((((Kayla))))))

Ben

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