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The Clouds Showed Rain
Contributed by
Mangos
on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 12:31:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It was in a dream
In a place Ive never seen
That I witnessed the beauty
Which could have been
In the tall green grass
I lay soft and tame
Looking up
The clouds began to show their rain
As she approached
So tall and lean
Legs so long,
A face that glowed and gleamed
She whispered in my ear
A voice to explain
She warned me to beware
The clouds showed rain
She crept beside me
Down on one knee
Brushed back my hair
And made her final plea
She told me she loved me
Thats why she came
She said we should hurry
The clouds showed rain
Then she kissed me
And I believed
That she was an angel
Sent to retrieve
She would take my heart
And cure my pain
But something went terribly wrong
The clouds showed rain
My beauty in white
Then grabbed my hand
We stood in the tall grass
And made this plan
We would run to the ocean
From where we both came
We would have to run desperately
The clouds showed rain
As we scaled foreboding mountain tops
Across valleys and through canyons
We would not be stopped
Through the vacant forests
Wilderness of northern Maine
Darker and damper now
The clouds threatened their rain
As the oceans blueness captured my eyes
She turned to me
With much surprise
She told me that she loved me so
But this would be as far as she would go
A tear slowly rolled down her face
A horrific site
I refuse to erase
On a lonely mountain top
As my heart ferociously thumped
She kissed me one last time
And then she jumped
I screamed and cried
And called out her name
As the sun broke through
Like a divine flame
Then with a loud and hurtful bang
The sky opened up -
The clouds released their rain
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Re: The Clouds Showed Rain
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 12:37:02 PM AEST
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such flowing beauty had me following intently then the sadness of her tears and the jump that packed such a serious punch.
Wonderful!
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Re: The Clouds Showed Rain
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 01:41:00 PM AEST
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| all in all a really beautiful piece of work .. |
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Re: The Clouds Showed Rain
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 04:02:32 PM AEST
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Nice comparision you have going on here, between nature's fury, and your emotions. I don't remember this one, so I'm not sure if I've read the original.
I like this one though.
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