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Array ( [sid] => 108632 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please???? [time] => 2005-10-28 08:53:18 [hometext] => How i felt once when depression took over me. [bodytext] =>

Please

Someone

Reach out for me

Let me know that you do need me

Please

Anyone

Can you even see me?

I’m not in the dark but my fires burning out

Please

My friend

Don’t walk out on me

Not in my time of need

Please

Best friend

Do save me

You’re the only one that understands me

Wait

Hold on…

Why are you leaving

Please don’t leave me

I’ll start to cry

Please come back before I die

Just so I can have one last cry

“Its down to this

My strength is gone

I’ve lost my faith

And I can’t hold on [comments] => 2 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 13 [informant] => blessedangel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Please????

Contributed by blessedangel on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 08:53:18 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry





Please

Someone

Reach out for me

Let me know that you do need me

Please

Anyone

Can you even see me?

I’m not in the dark but my fires burning out

Please

My friend

Don’t walk out on me

Not in my time of need

Please

Best friend

Do save me

You’re the only one that understands me

Wait

Hold on…

Why are you leaving

Please don’t leave me

I’ll start to cry

Please come back before I die

Just so I can have one last cry

“Its down to this

My strength is gone

I’ve lost my faith

And I can’t hold on




Copyright © blessedangel ... [ 2005-10-28 08:53:18]
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Re: Please???? (User Rating: 1 )
by enigma on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 01:56:35 PM AEST
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...depression is depressing...

Are my sorrows so different from yours?
Are my tears so much more bitter?
No.
The sea in which we struggle is the same for one and all,
Our hopes and dreams a universal panorama, stretching forth, it seems
forever on life's horizon.

When I hear your voice,
I will answer.
When I reach out,
please, please, be there.

I've answered many a voice, but, except for a couple ghostly vapors, none has ever been there.........

chin up!

Ron...enigma


Re: Please???? (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 08:47:08 PM AEST
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i tryed to get help this is excatly how i felt when i sliped back into depression good job




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