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Waiting now to guide his soul and aid him as he flies
To the land of afterlife, where he will reign again
Free from all anxiety, yes free from sadness, pain

There he'll meet his subjects, faithfull one and all
Listening and waiting, for their masters call
Osiris is my master, I his Anubis
Watching ever faithful, after deaths full kiss

Never to disturb him, leave him at his peace
Listen in the moonlight, howls I will release
You will hear me calling, telling all who hear
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The Jackal

Contributed by gwenevere on Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 05:12:46 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I am here to guard the tomb of my old master wise
Waiting now to guide his soul and aid him as he flies
To the land of afterlife, where he will reign again
Free from all anxiety, yes free from sadness, pain

There he'll meet his subjects, faithfull one and all
Listening and waiting, for their masters call
Osiris is my master, I his Anubis
Watching ever faithful, after deaths full kiss

Never to disturb him, leave him at his peace
Listen in the moonlight, howls I will release
You will hear me calling, telling all who hear
Jackal and my Pharoah, disturb and you will fear

Copyright © gwenevere ... [ 2005-10-30 17:12:46]
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Re: The Jackal (User Rating: 1 )
by ChibiMiroku on Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 05:56:24 PM AEST
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Well done!
I liked the theme alot. Favorite line: Watching ever faithful, after death's full kiss.
Wonderful!

Re: The Jackal (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 11:17:49 PM AEST
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a bit too confined for you Ros-
I love how you have marshalled the ideas..
great preception..
your talent is extraordinary-
I long for your work on Camelot-
(but that's jus' me..)

Good work

B

Re: The Jackal (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 12:45:24 PM AEST
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Nice peice of darkness here Ros, as masterful as your other side and just as
prevalent, dangeriously suspensful and as always, well crafted . . .

Ben

Re: The Jackal (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinfullilmissmuppet on Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 04:49:42 AM AEST
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hey,
gorgeous
wish i could write my darkness like that
loved it good job
till next time
emz

Re: The Jackal (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 07:28:08 PM AEST
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another amazing write!

from camelot to egyption tombs...you've got all the bases covered!...

perhaps the roman empire lay in wait to be graced by your historical pen!?!

wiz

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