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[title] => Never Enough
[time] => 2005-10-30 22:37:02
[hometext] => this was my first poem. bear with it...
[bodytext] => I know a girl who can't decide what she's done wrong, and how to make it right. Is she to blame? Is it all her fault? While she's thinking at night you can hear a pin drop. she's starting to come to terms with the fact that she'll never be enough. She never thought it would all be this tough. She doesn't know what to do differently or if its a lost cause. She doesn't know what to do. And the air grows thicker with every pause.
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Never Enough
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radstraightedge
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Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 10:37:02 PM in AEST
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I know a girl who can't decide what she's done wrong, and how to make it right. Is she to blame? Is it all her fault? While she's thinking at night you can hear a pin drop. she's starting to come to terms with the fact that she'll never be enough. She never thought it would all be this tough. She doesn't know what to do differently or if its a lost cause. She doesn't know what to do. And the air grows thicker with every pause.
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Re: Never Enough
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 11:23:38 PM AEST
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| This would be easier to read if you broke it down into stanzas. |
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Re: Never Enough
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by enigma on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 06:46:49 AM AEST
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...why is it that just about all of us poets tend to feel like there is something missing...that they are not enough...
...we are all told that we are enough...that we are lovable...why don't we believe it?
...keep asking...
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