Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 02-June 14:05:49 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 108827 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ice Ballerina [time] => 2005-10-31 19:59:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Ice Ballerina you dance in the darkness so far from the warmth of the light

Leaping and twirling your thoughts are all swirling you're lost in the chill of the night

There on the grass in the guise of a mortal on one toe see her pirouette

Gracefully gliding a tear she is hiding from hurt she will never forget





I watch her there 'neath the glow of the stars as her breath turns to fog in the cold

Barely I see but she won't notice me or my love that would never grow old

Standing in shadows I lower my eyes when she looks, for a moment, my way

Fearful she'll find in this so lonely mind all the feelings my words couldn't convey





If I were braver I'd dare to approach her and maybe the embers would glow

Fanning the fire with winds of desire that over our bodies would blow

Melting her heart into life giving waters refreshing two souls parched and dry

Alas she is frozen, her destiny chosen so I will just watch her and sigh







L. Carling c2005
[comments] => 11 [counter] => 910 [topic] => 33 [informant] => Rakerman1999 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
Ice Ballerina

Contributed by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 07:59:26 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



Ice Ballerina you dance in the darkness so far from the warmth of the light

Leaping and twirling your thoughts are all swirling you're lost in the chill of the night

There on the grass in the guise of a mortal on one toe see her pirouette

Gracefully gliding a tear she is hiding from hurt she will never forget





I watch her there 'neath the glow of the stars as her breath turns to fog in the cold

Barely I see but she won't notice me or my love that would never grow old

Standing in shadows I lower my eyes when she looks, for a moment, my way

Fearful she'll find in this so lonely mind all the feelings my words couldn't convey





If I were braver I'd dare to approach her and maybe the embers would glow

Fanning the fire with winds of desire that over our bodies would blow

Melting her heart into life giving waters refreshing two souls parched and dry

Alas she is frozen, her destiny chosen so I will just watch her and sigh







L. Carling c2005




Copyright © Rakerman1999 ... [ 2005-10-31 19:59:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Ice Ballerina (User Rating: 1 )
by Minus_Blindfold on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 08:05:30 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Very good write. The title suits the meaning. ANd your words are very good


Re: Ice Ballerina (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 08:15:27 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Never fail to impress my good friend, As always

~Clark


Re: Ice Ballerina (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 08:26:08 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
aw, Larry this was so loving and sweet. And masterfully
put together, as always. This somehow moved my
heart to an unimaginable place of beautiful wistfulness.
If the ink and quill are instruments, you are composing
symphanies that would humble Mozart.
Truly a pleasure to read your work.


~Breezy



Re: Ice Ballerina (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 08:35:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
My God This is Beautiful .. it would melt any ice goddess ..


Re: Ice Ballerina (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:53:09 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
A true maserpiece.
Amazing


Re: Ice Ballerina (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:53:34 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
oops i mean masterpiece lol


Re: Ice Ballerina (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 05:42:47 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
wow!! It is so good to have you back and posting again!!
Makes me want to yell "Go for it!!"


Re: Ice Ballerina (User Rating: 1 )
by Opium on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 08:12:51 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This is why I think twice befor ever stopping to write!. Looks like we both had our times away and now we're back :)
Great poem buddy, I still have alot of catching up to do on your latest unread poems.


Re: Ice Ballerina (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 11:32:15 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

wow this was so beautifully penned and yet
almost overwhelmingly sad. I just loved this
very poetic... I'm gonna go read it somemore
keep up the awesome writing Larry.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Ice Ballerina (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 05:33:11 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Larry, this was so beautiful and sad at the same time. Your words are lovely as well as the rhming.

Like Jecks said its good to see you back with us.

Jane`


Re: Ice Ballerina (User Rating: 1 )
by slogan on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 04:29:26 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I really like this piece of work.. good job..jh




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com