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LOVE








SultryRose's Signatures





Mommaw held you first.
Was so happy my heart almost burst.
Your Mom had tears in her eyes.
In hearts we all silently cried.

Happy eighteen, oh Micky dear.
You've become a man, I declare.
Happy, happy, happy eighteen.
On your own now it seems.

You taught me 'bout angels, grandson.
My grand child, yeah, very first one.
You've started your career now.
You'll go far and, how.

So mammaws heart sweels with pride.
Deep down luv in us resides.
You've grown into a handsome man.
Never let go of abiding hand.

God will protect your soul
No matter, where ever you go.
Always remember luv is greatest of all.
Just luv when you hear it call.

4-eva luv,
mammaw [comments] => 18 [counter] => 564 [topic] => 34 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 45 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
HAPPY EIGHTEEN

Contributed by emystar on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 08:49:57 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics












LOVE








SultryRose's Signatures





Mommaw held you first.
Was so happy my heart almost burst.
Your Mom had tears in her eyes.
In hearts we all silently cried.

Happy eighteen, oh Micky dear.
You've become a man, I declare.
Happy, happy, happy eighteen.
On your own now it seems.

You taught me 'bout angels, grandson.
My grand child, yeah, very first one.
You've started your career now.
You'll go far and, how.

So mammaws heart sweels with pride.
Deep down luv in us resides.
You've grown into a handsome man.
Never let go of abiding hand.

God will protect your soul
No matter, where ever you go.
Always remember luv is greatest of all.
Just luv when you hear it call.

4-eva luv,
mammaw




Copyright © emystar ... [ 2005-10-31 20:49:57]
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Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 09:43:41 PM AEST
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Very precious emy, Its very emotive and sincerly written, nice job

~Clark


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 12:42:32 AM AEST
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How wonderful for you all, Emy. This is so beautiful. I know that special love for the grandchildren. My eldest (twins) are almost 13. Good boys, smart and handsome with the world in their hands. God bless them each and everyone. He will cherish this forever, I feel certain.

hugs,
Rita


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by robertdavidson on Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 03:21:00 AM AEST
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A very sincere and heart-felt expression of your love comes through in every line of your well-constructed poem. I enjoyed reading.

Robert Davidson.



Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 04:32:03 AM AEST
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Grrrrrr...I tried to comment on this earlier today, and then the site crashed. My oldest nephew is 18 : ) It's amazing; not sure where the time goes...
You sound very proud of him, as I'm sure he is of you. I hope you plan on sharing this very sweet dedication with him...


Scorp.


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 05:44:10 AM AEST
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That is a beautiful write! ! !

Really enjoyed it. You did so well on this.

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful and personal write.

Take care,

Tim
:-)


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 08:39:04 PM AEST
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A beautiful write by a beautiful lady. He will cherish this one forever Emy. I hope he had the happiest birthday out.
Much love,
*sue*


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 02:31:26 PM AEST
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Happy birthday to your grandson. Beautiful, your poem is a picture for sure.. 1st or sixth.. all beautiful..took me way back to the time when my first granddaughter was born...would you believe I was more nervous than my daughter in law was.. my little grandchild was so small, her mom had a hard pregnancy, hard delivery, they tightly wrap them up into tight bundles of joy, she was so small, I feared she had no legs, but she was whole, thank the Lord.. I smile as I read

*******You taught me 'bout angels, grandson.
My grand child, yeah, very first one.

Happy, happy birthday sweet eighteen..

RLD


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 03:38:03 PM AEST
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Lovely and touching...Truly a gem...

Hugs and happiness
Jenni


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 04:06:45 PM AEST
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The apple of your eye. This was beautiful.

Love Angelxxx


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 08:50:23 PM AEST
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This is a really beautiful poem for your Grandson.

Take care.

Scott


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 07:31:36 PM AEST
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A very heartfelt write, full of love, pride and reverence/respect. Being 18 certainly is an important milestone.

A touching tribute, thanks for sharing, emy

Will


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 07:34:56 PM AEST
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Almost forgot, congratulations on your first grandson!!!!!!!!!!

Will


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 06:59:23 AM AEST
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A very sweet write with so much love
and devotion to someone so dear to
your heart. It was much enjoyed and
its nice to see someone with so much
love for another. I can’t wait to get
home from Iraq and see my little girl.
She is 10months old and I’ve only seen
her for 2 weeks of her life. Thank you
for your comments on my write they
go to the heart and are mush
appreciated. Take care and I’ll read
more of your writes if I have the
time….Steve


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 04:42:06 PM AEST
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softly written of a wonderous child. Well done as always Emy. Emotion of tears wiped from my eyes. For a grandchild's love will hold dear grammies heart - string of love ties.

Amber Rose Yeager.....


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 03:48:19 AM AEST
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ahh being 18 is great :) i wish i had someone like you to give me sopmething like this it beats any meterial gift that i could think of. this is amazing your awsome emy.


SM


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by thewordzwithin on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 01:11:32 PM AEST
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First my friend let me say hello and sorry I haven't posted anything in what seems like years but as you know life is a on going road that never ends. As usual, you have made that thing in my chest called a heart move with your well written, well crafted works of sheer greatness. Thank you for sharing and while I have you here, I might as well tell you...That my real name is Darnell Brown and I am the author of “City Limits”, a poetry book that I’ve written (go to www.citylimitsthebook.com to check out my site, there’s a place where poets can get their work posted exclusively on their own page and maybe dedicate it to someone) One of the reasons I posted this message is to let you know that I’m starting a magazine called “When The Pen Hits The Pad” and it’s going to be a place where artists, by that I mean more than just poets but writers, scriptwriters, painters, photographers etc. where they can have their work out there for people to see and possibly put them with people who can help them get to where they want to go. If you are interested in being a part of our first issue, send me and email to thewordzwithin@yahoo.com and tell me what you think and what you want to summit Tell all your friends who might be interested and keep up the good work!!!!!!!


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 11:12:48 PM AEST
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A wonderful tribute and beautifully written. A really good occurrance to write a poem about. I love how the emotions come out in this piece.

Wonderful write, emy

Will


Re: HAPPY EIGHTEEN (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 08:51:20 AM AEST
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Aww Emy congratulations. What wonderful news, im so pleased for you and your family.

THis was beautiful and lovely, it really is special. i know they will love this forever.

Jane~




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