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Array ( [sid] => 108897 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hearts that are broken [time] => 2005-11-01 22:23:03 [hometext] => To those who have had a broken heart [bodytext] => A broken heart is painful to bare,
ripping out of your soul,
No one else will seem to care,
that you feel left unhole,
Crying so hard your heart achs,
the pain is so intense to show,,
that your whole body starts to shake,
and you want to just let go,
Your heart ripping out from inside of you,
like being stabbed & left to bleed,
wishing the heart ach will break through,
not really knowing what you need,
thinking nothing good will come of this,
but getting the pain out,
wishing someone to share in your bliss,
so you just want to scream & shout,
Your hearts torn in two,
going nowhere fast,
what can you do,
to make this pass?
Cry ,till you can't any more,
tomorrows a new day,
God gives you another door,
so try to pray,
& cry some more!

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Hearts that are broken

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 10:23:03 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

A broken heart is painful to bare,
ripping out of your soul,
No one else will seem to care,
that you feel left unhole,
Crying so hard your heart achs,
the pain is so intense to show,,
that your whole body starts to shake,
and you want to just let go,
Your heart ripping out from inside of you,
like being stabbed & left to bleed,
wishing the heart ach will break through,
not really knowing what you need,
thinking nothing good will come of this,
but getting the pain out,
wishing someone to share in your bliss,
so you just want to scream & shout,
Your hearts torn in two,
going nowhere fast,
what can you do,
to make this pass?
Cry ,till you can't any more,
tomorrows a new day,
God gives you another door,
so try to pray,
& cry some more!

Copyright © LOWMAN613 ... [ 2005-11-01 22:23:03]
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Re: Hearts that are broken (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 10:28:24 PM AEST
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Yep. and that can be a broken heart over any matter. A hurt child, a lost love .. this is really a nice poem.

Re: Hearts that are broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 12:08:14 AM AEST
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Very sweet, heartfelt.

-Cassy

Re: Hearts that are broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Evening_Star on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 12:52:45 AM AEST
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your poem it rings true. you put into words what many of us has felt. well done.
liz

Re: Hearts that are broken (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:04:06 AM AEST
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at the first part its all emotional then you know you could just move on at the last part I love this poem my bestfriend broke my heart...i know how you feel...
Dee,

Re: Hearts that are broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:36:06 AM AEST
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Christina your words are ever so true. A great write outlining the pain and suffering one goes through when their heart is broken. Well done.
*hugs*
Sue

Re: Hearts that are broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 03:05:34 AM AEST
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Broken hearts causes pain, I know. Pray, YES!

Re: Hearts that are broken (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 12:49:04 AM AEST
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Oh Chrissy this is so true. You are so blessed if you can cry like this. Cleanses the soul, and the next day you feel like brand new!
What a beautiful helpful poem. I've never been able to cry like this, I was not allowed to cry as a child and so I can cry, but never enough.
Loved this poem,
Warm love
consuegranny

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