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Array ( [sid] => 108935 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => none [time] => 2005-11-02 14:59:25 [hometext] => thought i'd try something different [bodytext] => i have often wondered
what it would be like
to kill someone in cold blood
for no reason other than curiosity

i have often wondered
how it would feel
to have someone's blood on my hands
staining me forever

i have often wondered
if i could live, with the guilt of knowing
that i played "God", and took a life
and offered none in return

people, they laugh at me
push me
pressure me
don't like the way i think
say that i'm living my life wrong
respect our lives they cry
don't disrupt the way we live
you've got to fit in
because it's your only existance
and if you can't reachthe standards set
GET OUT! GET OUT!
we don't want you

they can't ever beat me
my thoughts all belong to me
nobody else
they turn away in disgust
when they see me
they don't want to know
but they raise millions for others
and nothing for me
but then i'm a hopeless case
i'm down and i'll stay down
with no chance of recovery [comments] => 1 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 75 [informant] => judasman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

none

Contributed by judasman on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 02:59:25 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

i have often wondered
what it would be like
to kill someone in cold blood
for no reason other than curiosity

i have often wondered
how it would feel
to have someone's blood on my hands
staining me forever

i have often wondered
if i could live, with the guilt of knowing
that i played "God", and took a life
and offered none in return

people, they laugh at me
push me
pressure me
don't like the way i think
say that i'm living my life wrong
respect our lives they cry
don't disrupt the way we live
you've got to fit in
because it's your only existance
and if you can't reachthe standards set
GET OUT! GET OUT!
we don't want you

they can't ever beat me
my thoughts all belong to me
nobody else
they turn away in disgust
when they see me
they don't want to know
but they raise millions for others
and nothing for me
but then i'm a hopeless case
i'm down and i'll stay down
with no chance of recovery

Copyright © judasman ... [ 2005-11-02 14:59:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: none (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 05:10:26 PM AEST
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I think you've got alot of soul searching to do. You have alot of issues that need dealing with. There is always a chance in recovery. You ever need someone to talk to please pm me. Chin up and may the sun shine brightly for you.
*hugs*
Sue

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