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Array ( [sid] => 109001 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blue Skies [time] => 2005-11-03 13:49:24 [hometext] => Just something that came to me while pondering [bodytext] => Tonight is cold out and the sky is blue,
a heavinly haven warming the heart,
yet the clouds are gone and I am still trying to see,
the moon and stars staring back at me.

Sometimes the sun doesn`t shine,
the rays get caught in the clouds,
sometimes you lose that proud,
yet my life is still mine.

My eyes can`t see what it`s not understanding,
heart can`t feel heat if it`s bleeding,
ears can`t hear if they are buzzing
I can`t speak when I`m screaming.

Sometimes the smoke from a cigarette,
blurs the vision and the reality,
sometimes the heartbreak is lasting
and life is at its fatality,
sometimes just sometimes - there are no time left
and you have to realize that you will be leaving.

Sometime, heaven will tear,
as a crack does appear,
the clouds turn red and blood drops fall from the sky,
the soil get furtilized by this death
as the world burns and breaks and flows
while a harsh wind does blow...

standing in a hurricane... tornado... earth quaking,
life is abit fuzzled but the ground isn't breaking.
As the wind stops blowing life returns to your legs,
to walk the green grove paths again.
With the crackle of an autumn leaf your torso unwinds,
seeing more now that you control the finds.
Arms gather life is a tree root gathers water and you feel strong again.
Your neck crunches and darkness finds your eyes are blind
and nature grants gifts of sight,tasting and hearing...


---

Now that you`re whole again the hole that was your heart wasn`t filled,
you didn`t feel what you didn`t associate with and your decisions
turned out to be
your
death. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Kellros [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Blue Skies

Contributed by Kellros on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 01:49:24 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Tonight is cold out and the sky is blue,
a heavinly haven warming the heart,
yet the clouds are gone and I am still trying to see,
the moon and stars staring back at me.

Sometimes the sun doesn`t shine,
the rays get caught in the clouds,
sometimes you lose that proud,
yet my life is still mine.

My eyes can`t see what it`s not understanding,
heart can`t feel heat if it`s bleeding,
ears can`t hear if they are buzzing
I can`t speak when I`m screaming.

Sometimes the smoke from a cigarette,
blurs the vision and the reality,
sometimes the heartbreak is lasting
and life is at its fatality,
sometimes just sometimes - there are no time left
and you have to realize that you will be leaving.

Sometime, heaven will tear,
as a crack does appear,
the clouds turn red and blood drops fall from the sky,
the soil get furtilized by this death
as the world burns and breaks and flows
while a harsh wind does blow...

standing in a hurricane... tornado... earth quaking,
life is abit fuzzled but the ground isn't breaking.
As the wind stops blowing life returns to your legs,
to walk the green grove paths again.
With the crackle of an autumn leaf your torso unwinds,
seeing more now that you control the finds.
Arms gather life is a tree root gathers water and you feel strong again.
Your neck crunches and darkness finds your eyes are blind
and nature grants gifts of sight,tasting and hearing...


---

Now that you`re whole again the hole that was your heart wasn`t filled,
you didn`t feel what you didn`t associate with and your decisions
turned out to be
your
death.




Copyright © Kellros ... [ 2005-11-03 13:49:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Blue Skies (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:28:53 PM AEST
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Sad.................
But, it was a beautiful beginning........
Why?
How?
many get hurt
And many dont want to try again......
Thats for the why and how
Come on
Great words, from a person who has alot to offer

Brew~


Re: Blue Skies (User Rating: 1 )
by Rum on Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 04:56:31 PM AEST
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I liked the physical descriptions of it, but the mental aspects were slightly confusing and the grammar is incorrect in several spots. By looking over it couple times I believe near perfection could be achieved ^-^




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