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Array ( [sid] => 109047 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Titleless [time] => 2005-11-04 00:53:43 [hometext] => this is something i wrote for a friend you know who you are hehe [bodytext] => She’s more than just a messed up girl
So much more but no one tries to see
How brilliant she really is
And all the things she can e
They can’t even tell that she’s
That she is a cutter with scars on the out side
And so much pain on the in
She feels like there is something wrong with her
But there is nothing wrong
But no one tries to see past that
Hopeless and sad look on her face
No cares or so she thinks
The ones that do never want to show
They can learn a lot from her
If the tried to see that
She’s more than beautiful on the inside
More than brilliant more than hurting
Enough so that it shows on the out side
Her scars, they just make her human
Humans hurt and when the do they cry
When they feel like her, like us
It is hard not to just break down
I can’t see why she feels so ugly or nasty
When she is beautiful even when she cries
Some times more so because it shows
That she feels something and is not afraid
To show it, well to show me
She’s a cutter but she hides it well
There is almost no way to tell
But if you look deep enough you can see
That she is the only one who knows
How deep she really has to cut
To feel something else
She cuts so deep sometimes
Through her skin into mine
Deeper and deeper
Till the blades at my soul
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Titleless

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 12:53:43 AM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry



She’s more than just a messed up girl
So much more but no one tries to see
How brilliant she really is
And all the things she can e
They can’t even tell that she’s
That she is a cutter with scars on the out side
And so much pain on the in
She feels like there is something wrong with her
But there is nothing wrong
But no one tries to see past that
Hopeless and sad look on her face
No cares or so she thinks
The ones that do never want to show
They can learn a lot from her
If the tried to see that
She’s more than beautiful on the inside
More than brilliant more than hurting
Enough so that it shows on the out side
Her scars, they just make her human
Humans hurt and when the do they cry
When they feel like her, like us
It is hard not to just break down
I can’t see why she feels so ugly or nasty
When she is beautiful even when she cries
Some times more so because it shows
That she feels something and is not afraid
To show it, well to show me
She’s a cutter but she hides it well
There is almost no way to tell
But if you look deep enough you can see
That she is the only one who knows
How deep she really has to cut
To feel something else
She cuts so deep sometimes
Through her skin into mine
Deeper and deeper
Till the blades at my soul




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Re: Titleless (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 03:24:46 AM AEST
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woah....so good...and hit a sore spot for me right now...like on my left side......john you're an amazing writer...

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Re: Titleless (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 09:27:38 PM AEST
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you are an amazing writer john, this shows a lot of emothion, i can tell you care about her, great job.


Re: Titleless (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 04:07:24 PM AEST
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a very powerful poem. shes lucky to have a friend like u.
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