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Array ( [sid] => 109152 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I like your beat [time] => 2005-11-05 23:44:50 [hometext] => I haven't written in forever...this one is horrible..but I felt like writing and I don't care what you think. so bah..but comments are nice...<3 [bodytext] => How I love this song
The song played from your heart
Will you...Will you save it for me?
Does it...Does it beat for me?

We're tangled in a mess
faux love at its best

And I've twirled you around'and round this floor a million times now.
But while im trapped inside the glow of your eyes
you're working the crowd keeping them hypnotized

Oh how I wish I could be the rapid breath escaping your lips
Thoughts like these keep me going as the twist of your hips
tear my insides apart

Could we...Could we stop awhile?
So I can pick up the pile
you waltzed your favorite number over
Can, can you hear my heart screaming?
Beautiful noise escaping my chest,
but you turn your ears away instead

Maybe we could sit this one out
Cuddle close in a darkend corner
But oh it must have slipped my mind
My little whore for attention,
you'll just keep on shaking, keeping up with that grind.

Don't you worry about me, I'll be just fine
Yeah love is blind, and I'll just shut my eyes
Blend into the crowd, and I'll hear you laugh
and squeal your new lovers name aloud

Yes darling let us see just how many will dance to your beat?
A dozen hearts will race
when you make up your face, and curl those pretty lips.
I bet they won't be able to take it
When you spin around, shimmy, and shake it.

As for me I think I'll sit another out
hang up my dancing shoes
fast forward and pause
because its suddenly clear, nothings here
and your timing..it's always off [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 43 [informant] => emocutie07 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
I like your beat

Contributed by emocutie07 on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 11:44:50 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



How I love this song
The song played from your heart
Will you...Will you save it for me?
Does it...Does it beat for me?

We're tangled in a mess
faux love at its best

And I've twirled you around'and round this floor a million times now.
But while im trapped inside the glow of your eyes
you're working the crowd keeping them hypnotized

Oh how I wish I could be the rapid breath escaping your lips
Thoughts like these keep me going as the twist of your hips
tear my insides apart

Could we...Could we stop awhile?
So I can pick up the pile
you waltzed your favorite number over
Can, can you hear my heart screaming?
Beautiful noise escaping my chest,
but you turn your ears away instead

Maybe we could sit this one out
Cuddle close in a darkend corner
But oh it must have slipped my mind
My little whore for attention,
you'll just keep on shaking, keeping up with that grind.

Don't you worry about me, I'll be just fine
Yeah love is blind, and I'll just shut my eyes
Blend into the crowd, and I'll hear you laugh
and squeal your new lovers name aloud

Yes darling let us see just how many will dance to your beat?
A dozen hearts will race
when you make up your face, and curl those pretty lips.
I bet they won't be able to take it
When you spin around, shimmy, and shake it.

As for me I think I'll sit another out
hang up my dancing shoes
fast forward and pause
because its suddenly clear, nothings here
and your timing..it's always off




Copyright © emocutie07 ... [ 2005-11-05 23:44:50]
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Re: I like your beat (User Rating: 1 )
by Kuro_Mirai on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 04:37:28 AM AEST
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Wow, good poem.


Re: I like your beat (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 12:43:44 PM AEST
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Such deep emotion in this write. keep seeking within. Words like this touch so many...............Mike




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