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Array ( [sid] => 109167 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Look Upon The Past [time] => 2005-11-06 04:29:21 [hometext] => So, I finally posted something again! I was really deep in thought when I wrote this. Not much rhyming, but I tried. This one is actually very meaningful to me. [bodytext] => Look upon your past
What do see?
Happiness?
Sadness?
Pain?
I see a different view of things.
A different point of view.
Things are not just a pain.
They're strange, fun, and new.
I see things in a different light.
Nothing's too horrible to keep me down.
I'm naive, I don't think much about things.
Like the person I am now might.
I see the people around me.
Some are happy, some are sad.
I smile for sad people because I want them to be happy.
I just wanted to be happy.
It all seems like a dream now.
Where has my life gone?
Why have all the people I loved become sad?
Why am I sad?
Why can't things be the way they were?
Will someone smile for me? To make me happy?
I want to be happy again. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Kuro_Mirai [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Look Upon The Past

Contributed by Kuro_Mirai on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 04:29:21 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Look upon your past
What do see?
Happiness?
Sadness?
Pain?
I see a different view of things.
A different point of view.
Things are not just a pain.
They're strange, fun, and new.
I see things in a different light.
Nothing's too horrible to keep me down.
I'm naive, I don't think much about things.
Like the person I am now might.
I see the people around me.
Some are happy, some are sad.
I smile for sad people because I want them to be happy.
I just wanted to be happy.
It all seems like a dream now.
Where has my life gone?
Why have all the people I loved become sad?
Why am I sad?
Why can't things be the way they were?
Will someone smile for me? To make me happy?
I want to be happy again.

Copyright © Kuro_Mirai ... [ 2005-11-06 04:29:21]
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Re: Look Upon The Past (User Rating: 1 )
by tiggytom on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 10:23:30 AM AEST
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hey good stuff i like your style, nice workx

Re: Look Upon The Past (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 12:55:45 PM AEST
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Poems don't need to rhyme, and as long as you like it it's all that matters. I could tell there was a lot of emotion in this, it really was a pleasure reading, thanks for posting, and great write, hope to see more soon.

-Cassy

Re: Look Upon The Past (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 01:37:29 PM AEST
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oh the past...

what a mangled heap of missed happening
and near-deaths :)

Re: Look Upon The Past (User Rating: 1 )
by Drmbeliever on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 01:46:32 AM AEST
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very interesting......i was a bit confused, but i think i figured it all out.

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