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peacefulness
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 06:53:39 AM in AEST
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peacefulness
all's completely calm
and happiness
fills my world
as i sit here
in this place that i love
where the sun
is always shinning
and creatures
are grazing in the field
or drinking from the lake
which shimmers in the light
a gentle breeze
rustles through the trees
wrapping around
the over towering mountains
a little stream
races through the rocks
while up above
doves sing to the world
and i cant help
but think what a shame it is
that this place cant be found
in this corrupted world
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2005-11-06 06:53:39]
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Re: peacefulness
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by memories_mist on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 08:26:40 AM AEST
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| You paint a nice picture of a great place to escape.Nicely done! |
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Re: peacefulness
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by tiggytom on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 10:11:49 AM AEST
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| i can identify with this, nice style xx |
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