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Array ( [sid] => 109260 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I've Finally Found Someone... [time] => 2005-11-07 19:37:36 [hometext] => Another co-write with the incredibly talented, Eddy (Kenty)Thanks for co-writing with me, Eddy. You're a star. [bodytext] => I finally found someone

I was lost caught in a storm
Thought my life was at an end
Misery to me was the norm
Then you came along my friend

You picked me up when I was down
I was lost in a stormy sea
Without you I would have drown
But you came and rescued me

I’d finally found someone
My heart it had started to melt
Loneliness had been and gone
A fresh new hand I’d been dealt

Fate had given me a second chance
My life had been turned around
Can this friendship turn to romance?
Had love for me been found

Though cloudy skies were up above
Inside me the sun it shone
It filled my heart with so much love
On the day I found someone
[comments] => 16 [counter] => 326 [topic] => 2 [informant] => eternal_dreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 40 [ratings] => 8 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
I've Finally Found Someone...

Contributed by eternal_dreamer on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 07:37:36 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I finally found someone

I was lost caught in a storm
Thought my life was at an end
Misery to me was the norm
Then you came along my friend

You picked me up when I was down
I was lost in a stormy sea
Without you I would have drown
But you came and rescued me

I’d finally found someone
My heart it had started to melt
Loneliness had been and gone
A fresh new hand I’d been dealt

Fate had given me a second chance
My life had been turned around
Can this friendship turn to romance?
Had love for me been found

Though cloudy skies were up above
Inside me the sun it shone
It filled my heart with so much love
On the day I found someone




Copyright © eternal_dreamer ... [ 2005-11-07 19:37:36]
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Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 07:43:21 PM AEST
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Tremendous............................Loved this happy, and love filled write.! Y'all two go together , and flow easily.!

Thanks for sharing

Brew~


Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 08:14:03 PM AEST
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Poetry wrote from experienced feelings seem to have this glow about them - a feeling. Makes you happy to realize it's out there. Amazing write, definitely a pleasure reading. Well done, the both of you, I hope to see more soon.

-Cassy


Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 08:37:17 PM AEST
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A beautiful write, Eddy and ED... Want to see more....
Jenni


Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 10:08:32 PM AEST
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ah so beautiful a dual colaboration this work of art between u 2, lovely as always, nice 2 see some friendship on this site 4 once instead of sadness as usual sue always a treasure 2 read same goes 4 u ed y can't the whole world be like this . . .

(((((((((((((sue)))))))))))))))


Ben


Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 11:29:37 PM AEST
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Beautiful...both of you...
It's fluidity says you compliment each other's work..
I hope there are many many more to come.

Sincerely-

B


Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 01:19:38 AM AEST
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well Sue I think we did good,,chears Hic here's to many more Hic ,,,hugs Eddy


Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 01:53:07 PM AEST
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You two make sparks fly when you come together on a collaboration! Very nice job. I always like co-writes by you two...Keep it up!



Scorp.


Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 03:45:16 PM AEST
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Oh I am so very happy, both of you write so well together, so happy this poem is because the skies are opening up, bluer skies, lovely happy souls, no more sadness, this is a peaceful write...friends are important, keep up the wonderful and beautiful co-writes both of you, God Bless...Both...S..N..E..sitting in a tree, S fell down, and so did E lol...hope it makes you laugh now... me so silly girl...

Raquel Leah :D


Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 04:55:01 PM AEST
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I think you and Kenty make a good writing dual. This poem is very well written.


Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 03:16:11 PM AEST
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Very beautifully written. What more could i say?
The rhyme and timing brought simple emphasis to
the sentiments in every stanza. My favourite stanza:

You picked me up when I was down
I was lost in a stormy sea
Without you I would have drown
But you came and rescued me

Very sweet and endearing... great collaboration too!
keep it up


Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by sleepykisser on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 10:52:38 PM AEST
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very nice! i especially like the "lost in a stormy sea" bit. i feel as if i can relate. great job!


Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 01:30:49 AM AEST
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Very beautifull to both of u.
huggs,
emy


Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamPoetess on Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 12:00:02 AM AEST
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Are not friends wonderful, very nice write, enjoyed:>


Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Friday, 4th September 2020 @ 10:21:14 PM AEST
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Beautiful....


Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Friday, 4th September 2020 @ 10:21:15 PM AEST
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Beautiful....


Re: I've Finally Found Someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Friday, 4th September 2020 @ 10:21:16 PM AEST
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Beautiful....




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