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Array ( [sid] => 109267 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Face in the Mirror. [time] => 2005-11-07 21:23:57 [hometext] => well like i say u need to decide. [bodytext] => One night, I found myself deep in sleep,
Dreaming of somone who would resuce me from life, and sweep me away,
but in a snap i was in another dream,
i was in one room with two mirrors
then in another with people lined up and down,
i was back in the room with two mirrors alone,
first i look into one mirror, i see me, fat ugly me, the outside me
then i look into the next, and i see a beautiful me, the inside,
i wonder which counts the most, outside or in?
which do you care more, inside or out? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Zanobia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Face in the Mirror.

Contributed by Zanobia on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:23:57 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



One night, I found myself deep in sleep,
Dreaming of somone who would resuce me from life, and sweep me away,
but in a snap i was in another dream,
i was in one room with two mirrors
then in another with people lined up and down,
i was back in the room with two mirrors alone,
first i look into one mirror, i see me, fat ugly me, the outside me
then i look into the next, and i see a beautiful me, the inside,
i wonder which counts the most, outside or in?
which do you care more, inside or out?




Copyright © Zanobia ... [ 2005-11-07 21:23:57]
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Re: Face in the Mirror. (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:28:23 PM AEST
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The middle kind of confused me, but I really love the ending, and I can sympathize with it well. It's an amazing question, and I would have to say the inside you, sometimes it just takes people awhile to see through the outside.

~Riisa


Re: Face in the Mirror. (User Rating: 1 )
by memories_mist on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:38:43 PM AEST
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A very nice question to ponder. Personally I choose what lies within, unfortunately much of the population is out for that 'barbie and ken' look. Thankfully, we all can beat our drums to our own path. Take Care!


Re: Face in the Mirror. (User Rating: 1 )
by Zanobia on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:44:58 PM AEST
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i was lost in the middle too, it just flowed so i put it, i care about he inside too.


Re: Face in the Mirror. (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 10:30:59 PM AEST
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Seemed a bit harsh on yourself-
If you show your inner bueaty to others then that is what they will see on the outside-
I stood before my own reflection and saw the monster within me, the same monster that others saw-
This made me ugly both inside and out-
Take care...
Joe


Re: Face in the Mirror. (User Rating: 1 )
by deathbringer on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 10:56:13 PM AEST
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most people care for the outside therefore they don't see the inside.Others care for the inside and ignore the outside.But i think there must be a ballance between the outside and the inside.You can't have a beautiful inside and an ugly outside couse in the end your mind reflects on the body and if you have a beautiful mind your body will just follow the same "line".I think i answered the question but forgot to comment on the poem.Well ... it happenes from time to time.




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