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Array ( [sid] => 109270 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => stop turning it around [time] => 2005-11-07 22:52:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => how can you help a person who doesn’t want help
I yell until my voice is out
Scream with all my might
and you still give me that same look
the I don’t care look
but as much as you don’t know it you need help
I try to sit you down
calmly explain the facts
but now your the one yelling
telling me to stay out
you need help more than ever now
I ask your brother to come talk to you
he accepts
I ask for you to come to talk to him
you accept
you both sit down hesitant for what to come
and as I should of saw it coming a mile away
you would B.S'd your way through the whole conversation
I'm thinking, screaming, and trying to make you
see that you need help
but how do I get you to see
Without you using it against me

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stop turning it around

Contributed by coolbreeze17 on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 10:52:20 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

how can you help a person who doesn’t want help
I yell until my voice is out
Scream with all my might
and you still give me that same look
the I don’t care look
but as much as you don’t know it you need help
I try to sit you down
calmly explain the facts
but now your the one yelling
telling me to stay out
you need help more than ever now
I ask your brother to come talk to you
he accepts
I ask for you to come to talk to him
you accept
you both sit down hesitant for what to come
and as I should of saw it coming a mile away
you would B.S'd your way through the whole conversation
I'm thinking, screaming, and trying to make you
see that you need help
but how do I get you to see
Without you using it against me

Copyright Â© coolbreeze17 ... [ 2005-11-07 22:52:20]
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Re: stop turning it around (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 11:04:42 PM AEST
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I know how that feels. I've went through it a lot. Dont give it up.
-Will

Re: stop turning it around (User Rating: 1 )
by memories_mist on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 11:08:30 PM AEST
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Nice write, voicing frustration to those who cant or wont help themselves. Good luck to you in getting this person the help they need.

Re: stop turning it around (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Influence on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 11:58:15 PM AEST
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good job

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