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Array ( [sid] => 109331 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Change for Nothing [time] => 2005-11-08 19:28:26 [hometext] => This is one of those, that I wrote, revised, read, revised again and just kinda said, let me put it out there and see what others think. [bodytext] => halting my tongue, being headstrong
no word from you,what have I done wrong?

I sit with friends that blabber, tonite words are few
my thoughts seem to escape back to you

meaningless fights we should have outgrew
lingering memories, my heart withdrew

urges within, your interest seemed renewed
my head was filled with deceit and I came unglued

empty words, shadowed and feared
you sat there and grinned, and I'm the one weird?

I am ready for you this time I do whats right
being with me isn't your God-given right

I will stand strong, not give in to your demands
take back what is mine,like I originally planned

forgiveness you say, where would you start?
once I trusted you with my soul, my heart

echos of words that haunt me, daunting and true
memories once vibrant turn wilted and I bid adieu. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 560 [topic] => 63 [informant] => memories_mist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )
A Change for Nothing

Contributed by memories_mist on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 07:28:26 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday



halting my tongue, being headstrong
no word from you,what have I done wrong?

I sit with friends that blabber, tonite words are few
my thoughts seem to escape back to you

meaningless fights we should have outgrew
lingering memories, my heart withdrew

urges within, your interest seemed renewed
my head was filled with deceit and I came unglued

empty words, shadowed and feared
you sat there and grinned, and I'm the one weird?

I am ready for you this time I do whats right
being with me isn't your God-given right

I will stand strong, not give in to your demands
take back what is mine,like I originally planned

forgiveness you say, where would you start?
once I trusted you with my soul, my heart

echos of words that haunt me, daunting and true
memories once vibrant turn wilted and I bid adieu.




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Re: A Change for Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by the_story_of_the_year on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 07:54:21 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed this. thank you.


Re: A Change for Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 08:14:59 PM AEST
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I like your write alot. A deep, very well expressed piece of poetry. A tale of a love that went wrong. Time will heal all wounds no matter how big or how small. Chin up and may love reign in your heart again real soon.
*hugs*
sue


Re: A Change for Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 09:24:53 PM AEST
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this is a great write..i loved reading this...thank you for posting this.


Re: A Change for Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 03:15:32 PM AEST
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i liked it, i like how you stand up for yourself too. good luck, you'll find someone better.




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