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swaying on the dance floor sea
bodies stained scratched with sweat
drunken shuffle mindless wit
choice of sex like a mad shopping mall
desperate looks and prurience hellos
is that all that i am sex not love
isnt their want of company
need of companionship
love of love
OR
one night stands dark heavy sweat
bodies pressed for only one purpose
a mingling of joy or have morals gone old
so i have been told
but looks have a passing daze
never letting me meet my age
a curse to look so danm young
all i want is to love someone
to be needed when that time is right
to be held tight
all night
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prurience hellos and sweaty windows

Contributed by lostrelic on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 06:31:00 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

visions of lust and the disgusts of flesh
swaying on the dance floor sea
bodies stained scratched with sweat
drunken shuffle mindless wit
choice of sex like a mad shopping mall
desperate looks and prurience hellos
is that all that i am sex not love
isnt their want of company
need of companionship
love of love
OR
one night stands dark heavy sweat
bodies pressed for only one purpose
a mingling of joy or have morals gone old
so i have been told
but looks have a passing daze
never letting me meet my age
a curse to look so danm young
all i want is to love someone
to be needed when that time is right
to be held tight
all night

Copyright Â© lostrelic ... [ 2005-11-09 18:31:00]
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Re: prurience hellos and sweaty windows (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 06:47:56 PM AEST
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To be wanted and needed with someone special is many a dream. Nice write as put in difference of no morals to having them. We are only human if we give in to those wanting feelings. but to find that one to love, that takes work and time, something I find many a man do not have time for. Just a female point of view. I liked how you wrote this.
Amber Rose Yeager

Re: prurience hellos and sweaty windows (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:53:27 PM AEST
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I like this. I love the imagery of life’s rat race. That one love will come along; one has just got to hope that they recognize it when it does and nurture it like it will never come again.

Keep writing

*Hugs*
~Shannon

Re: prurience hellos and sweaty windows (User Rating: 1 )
by SeanMcHaney on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 12:59:27 AM AEST
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I've had thouse feelings. I don't know how many nights I have held myself in my sleep wishing that it was someone to love and who loved me holding me.

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