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Array ( [sid] => 109424 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sitting [time] => 2005-11-09 22:05:54 [hometext] => *Please comment* [bodytext] => Sitting,
Trying to escape the frustrations,
Frustrations of everyday life,
Life that is filled with dispair and confusion,
Confusion caused by so many things,
Things unknown,
Unknown to all but endless,
Endlessly ensnaring with their traps,
Traps that help you to succumb,
Succumb to your frustrations,
Frustrations of everyday life,
All as you sit and watch helplessly,
Helplessly sitting,
Sitting [comments] => 4 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 48 [informant] => apolla [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Sitting

Contributed by apolla on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 10:05:54 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Sitting,
Trying to escape the frustrations,
Frustrations of everyday life,
Life that is filled with dispair and confusion,
Confusion caused by so many things,
Things unknown,
Unknown to all but endless,
Endlessly ensnaring with their traps,
Traps that help you to succumb,
Succumb to your frustrations,
Frustrations of everyday life,
All as you sit and watch helplessly,
Helplessly sitting,
Sitting

Copyright © apolla ... [ 2005-11-09 22:05:54]
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Re: Sitting (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 10:18:07 PM AEST
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short but to the point well i commented i hope you comment to others ppls write

Re: Sitting (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 10:18:57 PM AEST
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This was quite the unique poem, as I enjoyed that use of the last word to start every new line save one. I don't think I've seen that used around here, so thumbs up for that : ) I also liked what you had to say in the write as well, as the frustration is quite apparent, and it worked good for this write. Thanks for sharing

Re: Sitting (User Rating: 1 )
by ebooibo on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 11:44:02 PM AEST
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wow thats what I'm going through thats whats up

Re: Sitting (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 03:05:51 PM AEST
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very well written. i can definitly relate to feeling like that and it sux when all you can do is sit and think about it. anyways nice job and thx for your comment. i really appreciate it.

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