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[aid] => mick
[title] => Living On A Cliche
[time] => 2005-11-09 23:40:55
[hometext] => --Comments/critique GREATLY appreciated--
[bodytext] => I miss how it felt, living in a cliche The feeling that I met When my heart began to ricochet Off my lungs and into my mouth Followed by such graceful descent Into the depths I've come to call love Into your arms I've come to call home Into your hearts I'd come to call my own But home is gone The one I found in your eyes And the smile that danced With such sweet disguise They left with the days of idleness That we'd happened upon by such careful chance The memories come drifting back On a hint of smoke Spilling my heart to a phone The tears, they choke Realization lands hard as a blow to the chest It tugs painfully; From a sweater comes a thread It's not you I miss It's the running It's not your arms I long for It's the silence It's not your tears, your smile, your words It's not your hair, your hands, your clothes It's the happiness That we never had But we came so ******* close [comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 22 [informant] => TeenageDirtbag [notes] => |||||||Partially edited out, due to the use of letters to indicate a banned word. Note: Failure to adhere to site rules can result in the termination of your membership. Consider yourself warned! Thank you. ♦Moderator_14♦||||||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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